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2025-12-13
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ma petite requinette

Chapter 2: (i wrote a visual novella! sorry, this isn't a real update but i intend to write one soon)

Summary:

Hi! Sorry for the fake update. I do intend to write a real one soon. Here's why this exists:

I've been busy writing a visual novella! She's complete! She's great. If you like dolls, old women monologuing, being unable to get out of your hospital bed, or relearning who you are, check her out!

https://bitekiosk.itch.io/no-lungs-at-all

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Hi! Sorry for the fake update. I do intend to write a real one soon. Here's why this exists:

I've been busy writing a visual novella! She's complete! She's great. If you like dolls, old women monologuing, being unable to get out of your hospital bed, or relearning who you are, check her out!

https://bitekiosk.itch.io/no-lungs-at-all

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This is not a real update, but I wanted to share my VN here for anyone who might be interested. Check the summary/notes for info and the link.

By way of apology, I'll talk a spell about what I might write next; I think it'll be a not-fake (lol) chapter for this story. There's two ways I might go:

1. I'll continue where I left off. This will be a more explicit scene. May or may not involve menstruation depending on how I'm feeling. May or may not involve playing with the snack in the kitchen as au revoir. May or may not involve the Marquise de Durand extracting putting our petulant Madame de Mirande in her place. These are not rhetorical "may or may nots", by the way. Just spitballing. No matter what, the Comte de Carré will find it distasteful.

2. I'll fill in a bit of the Comtesse de Mirande's backstory. This will also be a more explicit scene. I have a reasonably clear image of who is involved and how I want it to go. I do realize I cut myself off from a particular conflict between young de Mirande and de Durand, or at least from giving it real tension given we've seen how they are now. It's not a big deal, but it was something I had in mind, and I don't know if the "how" of it is interesting enough either, but that's fine too. Whatever. If you wanna know about those eyeballs the de Plamondons were fucking in view of, well, you will.

Anyway, sorry for the fake update. But I'm really proud of my VN about a girl who discovers... hands. And I wanted to share her here. Thanks for reading!

Notes:

I plan for more. And I would have liked to go deeper on this in areas (and may circle back around). I feel like I wrote a lot of fluff and stage-setting and not much meat.

In my defense, I wrote four thousand words in twenty-four hours, and what came out came out. But do let me know if you find errors, would like elaboration on scenes here or there, if you have suggestions, or if any parts worked for you. Also PLEASE let me know if I missed tagging something that ought to be tagged. Thanks for reading!