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I am an avid reader and used to write until I had Kids, Got busy in life. Figure I will pick it back up later...Maybe?!?

I Love Fanfiction. I Do not Mind that Some of the Stories I Read are kind of Lemony, or even tend to touch on the Darker Side.
Now, Although I am very open minded for the most part, just want to point out a little something I have noticed and often come across. Lemony Goodness could be more Eloquently written. The words P*ssy & C*nt very overused, begins to feel repetitive and painfully Uncreative. "The Master/Daddy Kink" and making someone "Beg for It" or "We won't Finish what we Started".... First off, anybody can just go Finish by themselves. It's just common sense. Secondly, can we Please make our character's a little bit stronger of mind maybe? Not some Needy Sap. Maybe a little more self-Love or care perhaps? We may have a Character go through hell, but we can still Love our Character's a little better, make them Feel more genuine, By Fleshing them out more and by not Doing what everyone Else is doing in our writing.

I am only commenting on this due to the simple fact That this is an Overwhelmingly common Thing with Fanfiction. I Firmly Believe in creativity in writing and this kind of thing is a bit Blase' and well, I know it can be done Better!

Everyone Here on AO3 is so Talented and imaginative! All of those here each shine in their Own way! I am in no way trying to insult or tear anyone apart as I greatly respect the community here at AO3. I am just trying to point out that scratched record that keeps skipping and repeating the same verse over and over again, when we could just Simply move that Needle past that scratch and move forward with a Lovely Song.