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Will You Be My Valentine?
AfricanGrey
Summary:
You're a loser. A nobody. Your crush, Jackie Taylor, is the most popular girl at school and captain of the soccer team to boot. You think you have no chance. But then one day, she asks you to be her valentine!
Notes:
I hope you guys liked this!!! :3 I thought it was a cute concept. No Jackie slander here!!!
AfricanGrey Wed 13 Jul 2016 05:32AM EDT
Umm, what do you know about Jackie? Those claims are completely unfounded and based on biased information. I did my research and Jackie was a very kind person! Just because this fandom likes to personify her as a generic mean girl doesn't mean that's the truth!
My Heart Is Frozen Still
Woolfgirl
Summary:
Shauna storms out of the cabin, a thunderstorm of fury, wounded animal snarl on her face. Jackie watches her go, unaware of the dismal reality she will be faced with in the morning. She wouldn't have done it, had she known that Shauna's fire would not be enough to melt the snow that would trap her in an early icy grave. Jackie would have taken her place herself. But the wilderness takes, and takes, and takes, until they are naught but bones.
Notes:
I don't think Jackie would have made it to rescue if Shauna died, personally.
AfricanGrey Wed 13 Jul 2016 06:23PM EDT
Really loved how you showed Jackie's grief! The scene where she shoved her hand in the fire was very poignant. Although, I do have to question some of your characterization choices. For one, the girls would never have let Shauna freeze. The story of the Yellowjackets is really about female friendship and sisterhood and camaraderie and teamwork. Although I guess it's typical for Jackieshaunas to prioritize romance over the themes of the story. Also Lottie didn't even like Jackie. I just think that maybe you should stick to original works! Well maybe not because your prose could use some work too. Very flowery and distracting. If you want to write poetry, just write poetry. But keep writing and I'm sure you will improve <3
i could find the whole meaning of life in those sad eyes
AfricanGrey
Summary:
One night, Natalie has a nightmare. Thankfully, you're there to take care of her.
Notes:
I want to wrap Natalie up in a blanket and promise her that the world will never hurt her again
Woolfgirl Fri 15 Jul 2016 01:03AM EDT
Oh, so it's out of character when I write an ALTERNATE UNIVERSE where the girls take Jackie's side, but this isn't? First of all, Nat would never hook up with some random fan. She values her privacy. She doesn't even express vulnerability with the other survivors. And she has never, ever, expressed interest in women. I don't mind people taking creative liberties with their writing, but you are a hypocrite. I have reported you to AO3 for harassment, by the way. Enjoy your ban!
AfricanGrey Wed 13 Jul 2016 05:32AM EDT
I think you're deliberately demonizing Natalie (Do you have some sort of grudge against her? I noticed you made her uncharacteristically vicious towards Shauna before she died in your Jackie Lives AU). This characterization is accurate. I would bet my most prized possession on it. And Natalie *is* bisexual, by the way. In real life.
We'll Regret This In the Morning
Woolfgirl
Summary:
Shauna turns 36. Not a particularly notable number. It's a perfect square, sure. A multiple of nine. But besides that? Forgettable. Except for Shauna, it means that she's now lived just as long after the crash as before. The thought sends her spiraling -- a crisis of lost youth. What does she have to show for it now? A loveless marriage and a snot-nosed kid? There's only one other person who can understand the feeling: She finds Tai.
Notes:
It might have happened once. They are the only two survivors who still live in Wiskayok. They might be closer than most might think.
AfricanGrey Sun 17 Jul 2016 03:21PM EDT
You *cannot* say that me "speculating" on Nat's sexuality (which I'm not, by the way! It's fact!) is an invasion of privacy when you're writing *cheating* fic. Sure, Shauna cheating on Jeff makes sense, but Tai and her wife have a lovely marriage and a truly wonderful son. It's not right to drag them into fan content when they are not public figures. (And! Also! What do you mean, "only two survivors who still live in Wiskayok" ? Misty Quigley has lived there ever since they got back?)
Woolfgirl Sun 17 Jul 2016 03:40PM EDT
See, that's what makes it invasive. You are making false claims. I know what I'm writing is fiction. And, really, who cares about Misty Fucking Quigley?
Home Is Where Your Teeth Sink
AfricanGrey
Summary:
Shauna cheats on her husband with Misty. Natalie watches bisexually.
Notes:
Self-indulgent.
Woolfgirl Sat 19 Jul 2016 07:15PM EDT
God, seriously? What the fuck is wrong with you? This is disgusting. Are you this fucking obsessed with me? I write fic for myself. My real life is incredibly difficult and stressful and my writing is how I vent. I left you one well-meaning barely critical comment and you blew this *so* far out of proportion. I will be reporting this to the police as stalking and borderline sexual harassment.
AfricanGrey Sat 19 Jul 2016 07:23PM EDT
I'm stalking /you/? You didn't even have time to read the fic! I'd advise against getting the police involved. Writing pornography of real people is far more similar to sexual harassment than one person posting their original writing online and leaving a few slightly critical comments in response to the person who started it.
Just Like Animals (Animals)
AfricanGrey
Summary:
Natalie gets Travis pregnant.
Notes:
I'm not super familiar with Omegaverse stuff, sorry! I just think Natalie would make a great alpha :)
One Last Kiss
Woolfgirl
Summary:
Shauna always struggles on the anniversary of her wedding -- everything becomes heavier. Just living feels like wading through molasses. But some years she's lucky. Some years she gets a moment to herself in a dark room, and then Jackie finds her, candle's flame drawing in the moth. Her touch is cold and her heart won't beat, but she feels alive to Shauna.
Notes:
Poor Shauna.
Every Breath You Take
AfricanGrey
Summary:
Nat catches you stalking her and decides to put your devotion to use.
Notes:
I think she would be a little flattered!
Angel Hair and Baby's Breath
Woolfgirl
Summary:
Shauna and Nat are drenched in blood. They can hardly walk with the way it sticks to their clothes, seeps into their skin; it fills their nostrils with the scent of iron. Undeniably, they hate each other. Still, they're connected. Each with one hand on the handle on the knife, the other cut by its blade, skin and flesh melding together.
Notes:
This is set towards the end of their second summer, if that wasn't clear.
AfricanGrey Mon 31 Oct 2016 10:28PM EDT
Wow!!! Absolutely incredible!! All time favorite from me. Love love love it! <3
Hopelessly Devoted To You
AfricanGrey
Summary:
Natalie becomes Antler Queen. You are her dedicated servant forever. To make sure you both know, you let her carve her name into your thigh.
Notes:
ehehehe :3
Woolfgirl Sun 13 Nov 2016 05:12AM EDT
DELETE THIS. What do you know? Are you some weird, crazy stalker? This isn't cute or funny anymore. I can find out where you live. There are things that track you on the Internet. I'm not afraid of violence. I've hurt people before. I've killed. I know your type -- all bark and no bite. But believe me, if you do not explain yourself and delete this, I will make your life a living hell, for the short time it continues.
Woolfgirl Tues 12 Jul 2016 11:47PM EDT
This is absolute garbage. First of all, you write at a sixth grade level. Second, Jackie would have never gone out with a loser. She was obsessed with social climbing. And too closeted to ever look at a woman. Go back to writing "Hamilton the Musical" coffee shop AUs, since you can clearly only fathom character writing through tropes and archetypes. Honestly, have you ever interacted with a real person before? Why would you write something this cheesy for Yellowjackets? No one wants this.
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