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I've Heard of Monster Dongs But This is Ridiculous!!

Summary:

Susie, a well experienced dom, tries to make some fun with her old high-school crush and total virgin, Noelle Holiday. Turns out she's got alot more than she expected. lewd comedy ensues.

Notes:

Heyo, this is my first ever written fic. also my first smut fic. Extremely self indulgent but i got some encouragement from a couple of friends over discord.

Some inspiration taken from "Want Some Coffee?" by kimberlyeab, though the roles are sorta reversed this time X3c

Credit to SkyWrites for the title idea.

possible i might make a sequel fic if i get deliriously horny again like i did when i wrote this. who knows. though i have a longer fic i wanna work on in mind

hope you enjoy

Chapter 1: She's 114 Pounds But 14 Of That Is Just Cock

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   Okay, this is it. You've done this before, plenty of times. She's pretty but you know exactly what you're doing. It's not like you've been waiting for this moment for years or something, aha!

   Susie walks down the dusty apartment hall with her arm around an excited doe's shoulders. Both of them are unsteady on their feet, giggling on every slip. The doe, Noelle Holiday, sinks in playful fluster deeper into her arms. Her little white puff tail flicks and wags with excitement. Susie looks back at her with a toothy grin.

   Fuck, she looks so cute when she's this flustered...

   "My rooms right here, dummy." Susie tells her with a playful snark. Noelle tripped forward yet again, forgetting to stop when Susie turned around to her apartment door. The doe was too enamored with her childhood sweetheart to notice her stop.

   They first met in highschool, back when Susie was living her last few foster years in the creatively-named Hometown. Susie was 17 at the time. She was callous, shy, awkward in her own body because she was too broke for hormone therapy. She felt spooked being a teen like her in such a small town, especially since her few stints with the kids she met were particularly loaded. She felt like she was in another place where she wouldn't belong. She was just some lonely brick who no one liked. She later met Noelle on her first day, and she never forgot about her since. Ever since she handed that spare pencil to her in the back of Ms. Alphys' class she couldn't stop thinking about that sweet little doe. Her soft golden locks, the smell of chestnuts and peppermint from her kitschy sweaters, that adorable laugh of hers. Her voice sounded like a bell choir, the voice of an Angel. She was everything she wished she had, wished she could be.

   After making friends with the only human in the whole town, and only non-binary person there too, she came out of her shell, opened up. Soon she had an actual friendship with Noelle as well, the girl she always wished to meet. But there was always something a little bit more than just friendship bubbling underneath. That "study session" at her house, the Ferris Wheel ride with just them alone, the way Noelle seemed to blush and stutter when she was around her. There almost could have been something there. The most they got was at the Sadie Hawkman dance, they decided to ditch early and flee to the nearby lake. They both poured their hearts out to each other, and Susie was surprised to learn that Noelle herself was trans too. All this time this girl she thought she'd never be was just like her. She never knew girls like her could be so... Perfect. They exchanged a kiss, ran back to their respective homes, and never saw each other since.

   Susie grew up, had to leave town and make a living. For three years she bounced around jobs trying to make a steady life for herself. All the while couch-surfing between various partners. She certainly grew into herself, too. She became quite popular with the ladies, following hookups from various bars and flings from dating apps. Her latest was working as a barista at a local college campus. It seemed ironic, with how her life was going, college seemed so far from her reach, she'd never live like the kids around her. Eventually, she took some order for some awful sugary seasonal drink, before she realized she recognized the name she was writing down on the cup. She looked over to see that same pretty girl she kissed all those years ago. She hastily jotted down her number right with a winky face right on the receipt as she handed it to her, and waited for the best. Soon enough they got back in contact. They blabbered on and on about what they missed, apparently Noelle's studying filmmaking right at the campus she works at. Susie gets invited a house party with her, and after a few drinks they really hit it off. One thing after another, Susie takes her hand and slinks her around back to her apartment down the street for some "fun"

Susie was surprised to learn that the shyest girl she ever met, was quite the kinky woman. She had a hard time keeping up a cool face learning that the whole time they were in class together she couldn't stop thinking about her 'powerful claws pinning her down' and 'those sharp fangs of yours sinking into my shoulder'. Noelle seemed like a pure soul, but once she got a few drinks in her, she was about as much of a freak as Susie was. After a long discussion, Noelle happened to ramble out some story about how their mutual friend Kris convinced her to lift a couple of cosmetics from the convenience store down their street. Being something around 16 getting caught with a few bottles of mid-priced nail polish should get you nothing but a slap on the wrist, but their hotheaded local cop in possibly the quietest town in the county had other plans. She got cuffed and roughed into the back of her car, all the while yelling out about teaching her a lesson or something. Of course, being just a kid, and the mayor's daughter meant nothing but waiting about a half hour in a cell while her mom gave a strongly worded phone call, but the experience of it all shook her skiddish teenage brain. Usually that sort of situation would be a nightmare, but her hands getting cuffed together, being roughed around by a strong woman by her big arms, pushed into a seat and getting scolded for being a bad girl… It unlocked something in her freaky little mind. Ever since then she had the wildest fantasies she thought she'd take to the grave never telling a soul. It was a relief for the both of them that Susie was just as into that sort of thing that she was. She offered to give her some fun on her first time, teach her the ropes, if you will. they spent an hour hushed in the corner flusteredly whispering to each other all the things they wished to do to each other, until it was too much for them to stay at that stuffy house party.

   Click.

   "Make yourself comfortable. Also don't mind the mess, I don't get that many people around here often. Haven't had the chance to uh… clean up, either… Heh." Susie said with an awkward chuckle.

   Her apartment was fairly modest. One room, a kitchen, a bathroom, a closet, an okay view. Noelle shifted a blanket aside and sat down on the couch. She shifted her hooves and knocked aside a can of White-Flavored energy drink. Her eyes darted around the room nervously. A bed with a loose sheet sat at the end of the room by the window, computer desk at the opposite end with several more energy drinks piled around it. a dusty stained low table sat in front of the couch, with a bong and other smoking appliances scattered around along with it on an aluminum dish. An empty pizza box and a bag of chips sat there too, with a TV remote and a gaming controller. Noelle was too horny to mind all the mess, her skin buzzed with excitement, she squirmed in place. This was it, the girl of her dreams, her first time too, all with the weird, kinky sordid fantasies she always dreamed of-

   "Want something to drink? i got soda, milk… some. orange juice… Could grab you some water." Susie interrupted Noelle from her lustful fugue from the kitchen, scrounging around her yellowing fridge.

   "OH-! Yeah! Sure! Of course, uh, I'll have some water, please. Thank you." She nervously blurted out.

   Susie walked back around to her on the couch, instead of simply handing her the glass, she lifted it to Noelle's lips and let her drink by her hand. Noelle wordlessly complied, taking long sips before Susie tips the glass down and hands it back to her. Susie gave the back of her head a few strokes, running her fingers through her soft blonde hair. She looked back up at her with big wet doe eyes, hair raised up in a puff and ears perked. A spark of wonder behind those wide eyes sent a great feeling of lustful warmth within Susie. Your too cute, I could just eat you up right now, She thought to herself. She plops herself down beside Noelle.

   "How are you feeling, 'Ellie? You look nervous." She says to Noelle, softly, leaning in.

   "I-I'm fine, yeah. J-Just… REALLY, excited… Fahah…" She stuttered out with a fluster. She seemed honest, she smiled brightly despite her embarrassment.

   "Okay, sure… Just wanna make sure you're settled in. Let you just relax for awhile, and you tell me when you're ready, okay?" Susie told her gently. she had a hand on her leg, but slowly shifted it away as she began lifting herself off the seat.

   "No, Please, I-I really want this… Please, I want to start now." She said with surprising confidence. She held Susie's hand back onto her thigh and looked at her with deep desire. Susie looked back at her with slight concern.

   "Are you sure? I don't wanna take things so fast, this is your first time, right?" Susie said, with a wavering tone.

   "Yes, I'm sure. Susie…" Noelle leans forward to her.

   "I really, really want this. Please…" She says with insistency.

   "Suit yourself then…" Susie gave a frisky smirk. "Now… I'm not planning on getting too rough with you tonight, but just wanna be safe with you. The safeword is 'Mouse', is that okay with you?" Susie tells her, facing her closely.

   "Y-yeah, I got that. That's alright with me" Noelle says back.

   "Okay, again, I'm not gonna do anything crazy with you just yet. I just wanna be safe with you. Now, if you feel… Uncomfortable… About yourself… Or uh…" Susie stammers. Noelle tilts her head in response. "I mean like… If you ever feel, dysphoric, about yourself, or anything, please tell me… Is I guess what I'm trying to say" Susie finally blurts out. It's a little strange how Susie feels so shy about all this all of a sudden. Maybe she just feels nervous about asking such personal questions about the girl she met all the way back in Highschool. She's been quite intimate with plenty of girls, yet this time feels oddly personal for some reason.

   "Oh, Susie…" Noelle says to her. "I mean, I don't really? Like if your asking about how I feel about my parts, like, I don't mind having it? I mean like I don't think I'm gonna be topping any time soon but I just don't really mind it at all, or being there at least." Noelle explains, somewhat stammering around awkwardly through it. It's clear she hasn't said any of this out loud to anyone, let alone in a situation so intimate. "Like, I think mine just looks a little weird? I don't know, it just looks, um, different, than any of the ones I've seen and I just-"

   Susie interrupts her.

   "Look, 'Ellie. I've been with plenty of partners, I've seen so many dicks. I'm sure yours looks fine and I don't mind if it isn't sticking straight or something. I don't mind if it's not that big, I don't care about size and you don't need to put yourself to the standard of those girls you see on internet porn, okay. I seriously don't mind if you have trouble getting it up either too, I've got issues myself and I know how to get around that sort of thing. You're gonna be fine. Just let me take care of you, alright?" Susie says to her, holding her chin lightly in her hand. Susie sees she's anxious, and she doesn't want her to break down on her first time. She tries her best to calm her down before they get into things.

   Noelle responds with a nervous nod. "Okay." Says Susie. "Now, I need to go get some stuff, okay? You go stand right there and I'll be back while you get ready. You got that?"

   "Mhm…" Noelle gives a excited nod. Susie can't help but smile at how cute she's being. Her dorky smile, her raised, fluffed up fur, perking ears and blushed cheeks. She turns around and scrounges into her closet. She pulls out her bag of toys, along with a black collar with a leash beside it. She tosses her jacket onto her bed and walks back over to Noelle. She's standing there with her hands held together and that same dorky smile she had. her face is flushed red like a holly berry, and her tail wildly flicks and wags behind her. Susie lifts her off-white tee and tosses it aside. she slides her hand over her stocky waist, caressing the scales on her belly and showing off the thick flat abdominal muscles she has under a thick layer of fat. She's no bodybuilder but she looks strong. A Thick build with solid muscles under a soft layer of fat. She teases her hand under the band of her sports bra, subtly giving the other arm a flex. Noelle looks so red she might glow, her eyes wide staring right at her chest. Susie finally lifts up her sports bra, revealing a pair of small, rounded breasts on her pecs. She's somewhat flat, but her larger-than-average chest muscles, strong shoulders, and soft scales makes Noelle nearly melt. At this point Susie realizes this is probably Noelle's first time ever seeing a girl's tits in person, judging by her reaction. She looks like her heart might explode. She runs her hands through her hair, mostly an excuse to flex her arms a little more, shakes her hair out and gives a toothy grin.

   "Alright, Doe." She says in a stern, yet teasing tone. "Your turn."

   Noelle stammers a little bit, feigning confusion.

   "Loose the sweater, and the shirt too. take your top off." She commands her smugly.

   Noelle then shakily lifts her sweater vest off and nervously unbuttons her shirt. It takes awhile, her hands are shaky, but now she just has her grey undershirt. She's breathing heavy and a little too quick, her eyes briefly dart back up to Susie before coming back down to her chest. She lifts it off until she's just down to her strappy black bra. While Susie grew into her broad frame since she left, Noelle stayed the same, lanky skinny doe she was when she was seventeen. She held her lithe little arms to her chest, her thin wait had a little bit of curve to it though, likely from hormone treatment. If Susie were younger, she'd be jealous, but she's been around a lot more girls since then and has grown a bit more humble than that. Instead, Noelle spots Susie drooling through her grin as she stares at her chest.

   Noelle then, slowly, nervously, moves her hand to her back and unclasps her bra, revealing her pert, fluffy chest. Her breasts are larger than Susie's, nice, plush, handfuls that weren't very noticeable under her puffy sweaters and cardigans. They were slightly pointed, with small, biteable puffy nipples. What excited Susie even more was the great puff of chest fur in between and around them. Downy white fluff from her chest that she wished she could bury her face in. Susie walks forward to her, right face to face. Noelle sinks deeper into her shoulders. Susie then places her large, clawed hands onto her shoulders. "Adorable… Fuzzy little thing…" She says in a deep growl that makes Noelle's hair stand up. She rubs her hands up and down, feeling her soft fur. Her hands drift downward to her chest, and she places both her palms firmly on Noelle's breasts. She begins squeezing handfuls of her tits, massaging and kneading them in her hands. Susie gives a hungry grin and Noelle gives out a surprising moan. The sensations the little doe is feeling are lightning bolts shooting up and down her body, its clear she's felt nothing like this before. She's completely in Susie's hands, like putty, easily teased and molded to her touch. Susie dives her snout into Noelle's fluffy chest and gives a deep, warm sniff. It smells heavenly, like holly and pine and cinnamon and sugar, with a deep hint of musk underneath. Noelle's husky fur scent is like an aphrodisiac to Susie, she already feels quite tight under the belt just smelling her while she softly moans. She even feels her voice in her chest, as she lands kisses and smooches onto her chest and collar. Her kisses creep up her neck, taking stifled whimpers from Noelle. She holds her neck as she gives it a deep lick, then moving up to her cheek. She goes in, locks lips with her. Noelle's taste, Oh Angel her taste… Her lips taste like sugar cookie lip gloss, her soft little tongue tasting of gumdrops and supple flesh. She dives her maw into hers, snaking her much larger tounge into her mouth, and tickling her sharp fangs against Noelle's mouth. This is heaven. She thinks. I could just eat her from the inside out, I wish I could savor her forever…

   She, to both of their dismay, pulls away after a moment. Susie opens her eyes and gives a deep puff from her nostrils. Noelle is panting with lust, a string of drool connecting their mouths. She looks up at her eyes, she's staring off to nowhere.

   "How're you doing, 'Ellie?" Susie mumbles to her.
   "G-great…" Noelle mousily stammers out. She's totally lost in fantasy. Her poor lil' brain can't handle this pleasure. Susie thinks to herself.
   "That's great, Doe." Susie says, holding Noelle's cheek. "Now, are you ready to take this a little bit further?" She inquires. Noelle responds with an excited nod, eyes wide with her mouth hanging open. Susie takes a few steps back and grabs the collar from the table by her. She lifts the open black collar to Noelle's neck.

   "You sure?" Susie asks. Noelle gives a nod and a yelp sorta like a 'yes'. She wraps the collar around her neck and latches it in place, slipping her fingers between her neck and the collar to test the tightness.

   "From now on, you do as I say, exactly as I want you to. You got that, Doe?" Susie seductively demands. Noelle gives a certain nod. "Good girl." She coos. Noelle seems to nearly faint at the words alone. She's so easy, it's not even funny. Susie thinks. well okay it's at least a little funny still.

   She takes the leash and clips it onto her collar, she briefly sees the look of adoration from Noelle's eyes. Her sweet, adorable doe eyes. She stands there staring at Susie, hands held below around the hem of her skirt, her breasts slightly pressed by her arms. Her tail wags wildly behind her. She's so excited, and I haven't even taken off her skirt yet. I've never seen someone get this horny so fast before. Susie ruminates.

   "You follow my lead, do as I say. I'll make sure of that." Susie says to Noelle, holding up the leash, wrapping some of its length around her hand. "I'll make sure you behave, little Doe, you don't want to see what happens when you don't." She gives a devilish grin as she gives a light tug to the leash. Noelle's eyes go wide as she gives a yelp and stumbles a step forward. She looks back up at her panting. Susie tugs again, harder this time, and lands her lips back on hers. Susie kisses her much more forceful this time, mashing her tongue deep into her mouth, nearly into her throat. Her teeth dangerously close inside her mouth. She, after a moment pulls away. Noelle catches her breath for a moment.

   "Follow me, Doe." Susie beckons. She gives the leash some slack and walks her to her bed. Noelle takes quick, light, nervous steps. She nearly slips a few times trying to follow Susie's lead. She'll get the hang of it eventually. Susie remarks to herself. It's cute, honestly, how flustered she is by this.

   They both stand at the side of Susie's bed, a blanket lumped to its side and a black sheet slipping off one corner, her old purple jacket is slumped at the end too. Susie places her hand on Noelle's shoulder and pushes her down, forcing her to sit off the side of the bed. Noelle looks up at Susie, Susie looks down at her with a sinister grin. She holds up the end of the leash where Noelle can see it, and tugs it back. Noelle's face slams into the front of Susie's hips, right above her groin. She can tell Noelle can smell her arousal, her cute little deer nose flares up and sniffs excitedly.

   "Help me take these off, Doe." Susie demands. Noelle paws her hands up to Susie's waistband, looking back up at her with puppy dog eyes. Her hands shiver as she slowly fiddles with Susie's pants button and zipper. She pulls her coarse jeans of her legs, Susie courteously steps out of them as Noelle reveals a pair of musky worn boxers. The smell is strong, with a thick trail of pubic hair snaking from the top. Noelle pulls the dirty boxers down like a hungry wild animal, pulls them all the way down off her legs. Her eyes go bright staring at Susie's cock. It's a bit smaller than average, but a bit thicker than most. Its about half mast but sweet Angel the smell coming off the thing. Noelle can't resist but put her hands and feel her genitals around. She cradles it in her hand, massaging it. She then leans in for a deep sniff. She takes in Susie's musk deep, her eyes close and her ears turn back in bliss. She, almost without thought, begins licking at Susie's cock.

   This is adorable, but I have different plans for tonight…

   "Tch-Tch. Not so fast, little Doe." Susie says condescendingly, pulling her away by her leash. "You can go get your tastes in later. I want to give you some fun first~" Susie coos at Noelle. She gets on her knees in front of Noelle's black skirt. The doe sits back with her hands placed behind her. Susie grins back up at her like a shark, slowly moving her hands up to the band of her skirt. Noelle whimpers and shudders as she feels Susie's claws dig into hips as she reaches them in under her skirt and panties. Susie gives a drooling grin…

   This is it Susie, the moment you've been waiting for years. The girl of your dreams, squirming at your every touch. No need to panic right now, you've given plenty of girls head before. you're practically an expert by now. You're gonna give your life's crush the best blowjob she'll ever have. Probably cum like, a hundred times. You can do this, she's already fallen head over heels, you know exactly to expect. Give your little princess the best head in the world, just gotta take her out of that skirt, lift it down and-

   …

   …

   Fuck.

   …

   (Throb… Throb…)

   …

   Susie stares in utter disbelief. She's staring face-to-face with probably the biggest cock she's ever seen. She pauses there silently. She didn't even know it was possible to have something that big, let alone on such a tiny girl like her of all people. It throbs with arousal, becoming fully erect. It's freakishly large, at least a foot long just by looking at it. It runs more than halfway down her thigh, and its about as thick, if not slightly thicker than the energy drink can lying next to Susie on the ground. She resists the urge to hold her forearm up to the massive shaft. Her bloated testicles are almost the size of Susie's fist each, she could just about fill both her hands with them. How the hell does she even hide this thing? She thinks to herself in morbid curiosity. She stares down the slick, dripping head of Noelle's enormous cock. This is probably the first time in years Susie has felt genuine fear.

   "…"

   "Susie? Are you okay?" Noelle asks with slight concern.

   "I-I, um… Yeah, I'm good." Susie stutters, she finally lands a slight flat tone.

   "I-Is there something wrong? I-Is there something w-with my…?" Noelle says, slightly panicked. She looks down at her cock, grabbing it by the base with her hand. She lifts it up, giving it a wet, meaty THWACK against her abdomen to take a closer look. Susie blushes even harder. Sweet Angel… Susie thinks to herself, staring in bewilderment at Noelle's cock lying nearly all the way up on her stomach, just reaching past her belly button.

   If that thing went inside me I'd be sent to the hospital…

   "Oh, No-no. It's fine Noelle, it's not your dick it's just…" Susie stammers out.

   "You're… You're really pretty, and to be honest I've been pretty nervous about this whole thing" Susie mumbles out. It wasn't really a lie, she really did feel anxious about going down on Noelle. No matter the dom persona, she's still the same nervous softie for Noelle she's always has been. She simply didn't want to make Noelle any more insecure than she already has been, she didn't want to ruin Noelle's first time.

   …And plus, she didn't want to pass up the opportunity to suck possibly the biggest dick in the world. I mean, she's a lizard monster, those animals are meant to swallow things whole. She's lasted longer using her mouth than most anyways, and she's basically has an ironclad gag-reflex. She's an expert, she can handle this…

   …Right?

   "Ahem… uh…" Susie tries to switch back into Thrash Mode. Looking back up at Noelle with a shady, drooling grimace. "Get ready to be swallowed up, little prey~" She growls. Noelle goes back to blushing tomato red, cackles standing straight up in arousal. She gives a scared, excited whimper.

   She flashes her gums as she slowly opens up her fanged maw. Her sharp teeth dangerously close to Noelle's swollen tip. Snaking her large tongue now, Coating her thick head and upper shaft. Noelle yelps out with a shivering moan. She's quite sensitive down there. Susie suspects. She's able to wrap her tongue about halfway down Noelle's shaft before she begins placing her lips around the head. The taste is strong, musky, but almost sweet, and oh Angel the smell is powerfully strong. Even with just her lips around the glans, her jaw is stretched out slightly, Susie now wonders if this might be a little more difficult than she previously thought. She slowly begins moving her mouth back and forth down her length, all while dancing her tongue all around the sides of her shaft, coating it slick. Her massive girth stuffs her mouth wide, even for her large snout. it nearly stuffs into her cheeks, which still have to stretch out at the lips to accommodate its sheer width. She works her way about a third of the way down, all the while Noelle is moaning madly with pleasure. From Susie's point of view, Noelle is looking down at her wide, starstruck eyes. She has a wide, open smile and eyebrows raised up in manic confusion. It looks like she's completely out of her mind, she doesn't seem to believe it, it's probably the most pleasure she's had in her life. Her head swings back in euphoria as she grips down on the sheets below her. Susie keeps bobbing up and down the upper third of her length, which about reaches most of her snout without hitting to her throat. Back and forth, she slathers her shaft and-

   "Ghck-!"

   ... Dammit.

   Susie gives a gag. She went just a little too far than she meant and accidentally felt Noelle's cock in her throat. She gives a stifled grunt through a mouthful of girlmeat and puffs out her nostrils.

   "A-are you okay??" Noelle says in concern. Her voice shaky from mind-numbing pleasure. After a brief pause, Susie gives an "mm-hmmpf!" sound through a mouthful of girl cock while giving a thumbs up. I can't mess this up, I don't wanna chicken out just yet. Susie convinces herself. If I just muscle through it and be careful and don't say anything to her I can get through this no problem. I'm in the groove, if I stop now I can't get back.

   'O-o-okayyy~! T-That's G-good~!" Noelle responds, barely able to make words out through the mind-blasting pleasure she's having. Susie has already gone back down on Noelle's cock. Again, keeping around the same motions, though a little more slower and carefully. Noelle gives a warbling moan.

   "Mnnnnmmnmahhhahhahah~!" Noelle whines out. She throws her head back, her shoulders squirm. Her hands grip hard against the mattress as she bucks her hips. Susie begins unexpectedly feeling more and more of Noelle's length, having to struggle to stifle gags as her cock enters her throat. Noelle moans louder, while Susie begins to feel discomfort from the sheer amount of cock stuffing her mouth. She's about halfway through now, her eyes shut tight. Just… Just breathe through your nose… You can do it… She huffs in and out through her nostrils as Noelle bucks into her throat again. Susie gives another gag, but Noelle is too distracted to notice. Her cheeks are stretched painfully, her jaw is getting sore, her throat feels tight as it's penetrated by Noelle's thrust. Her eyes begin to tear up, watering up her makeup.

   "Oh~! YES~! PLEASE Miss~! TAKE me~!! PLEASE MISS Just swallow me up whole~! Take your little prey~!" Noelle blabbers out. Susie's barely taking it, she starts grabbing onto the closest thing to her, which happens to be Noelle's thighs. He holds tight, her claws start digging into her thighs, not enough to cut her, but Noelle bursts out with a loud moan. Her arms flail out onto Susie's shoulders, rubbing down her back and shoulders. before reaching up her neck and then running her hands through Susie's hair. The scales on the back of Susie's neck stand up, a sinking feeling hits her stomach. Noelle grips her long black hair, and holds tight on her head. Susie's eyes go wide, tearing up. Susie grips harder on Noelle, and Noelle bucks harder into Susie's throat. Her hands push Susie's head down on her cock more, forcing it down her throat to the base. Susie stares dead forward in terror, she's breathing in and out heavily through her nostrils but she can only smell the heavy musk of Noelle's pubic fur. She feels her cock in the middle of her throat, tears are running down her cheeks. Her eyes are rolling back, she gives pained moans muffled through the mass of cockflesh. She feels faint.

   Oh fuck… This is how I die, isn't it? I'm gonna choke to death on her cock. I'm chocking on my girlfriend with the biggest cock in the world. This is really how I'm gonna go? What a hell of a way to die.

   She's nearly asphyxiating, emotionally, seeing the potential end of her life. The sheer tightness of her whole body feels like its crushing her. She cums, splattering a watery load onto the carpet below her. She never thought she was gonna cum from giving oral but nearly suffocating on the love of your life might do something to you. Her mind buzzes with noise.

   "Ahhhhhghh~!!! OH~! PLEASE Missss~! Susieee~! Susieee~! I'm close~! I'm close I'm-close-I'm-close-I'm-close~!!!! SUSIE~!!" Noelle screams out, holding Susie's head hard down her cock. Her massive stones clench hard, her shaft throbs and pumps hard before spurting a torrent of spunk down Susie's throat. Susie feels pump after pump after pump shoot through the underside of her shaft. Cum splatters into her throat fills her cheeks and spurts through the seams of her lips. It leaks through her sinuses and spurts out her nostrils. It feels like half a pint of pure splooge has been hosed into her face.

   Susie's eyes roll back , her vision starts fading, her mind feels numb. Her grip gets weaker before she limply slaps her hand on Noelle's thigh. The doe achieves just a moment of enough lucidity to notice her signal before quickly pushing her off her cock, sliding out from her mouth like an arm through a sleeve. Susie sits there on her knees, head hanging down in a daze. Cum pools in her mouth, dripping out of her open jaw. Noelle, still in the throes of orgasm, accidentally paints Susie's face white with a few poorly aimed shots of cum.

   Susie kneels down and coughs up a glob of cum. She heaves for breath, trying to catch as much air as she can. "SUSIE! are you okay?! I'm so sorry I didn't notice-"

   "I-I-I'm… I'm o-okay…" Susie puts up a hand up to Noelle. "Well… I'm glad you had fun, seemed like you really came hard there…" Susie says weakly, giving a wavering smile. She stares at the pool of cum below her, the strong sour taste stinging her whole mouth.

   "Yeah, that was great… Though my loads have gotten a lot weaker since I got started on hormones a few years ago…" Noelle tiredly remarks. looking nowhere in particular.

   "Wh-H-HOW?? The hell was that less than usual?! That must've been like, a gallon or something!!" Susie yells out in surprise. She was exaggerating, sure, but it sure felt like she just swallowed a hose full of jizz and pumped it into her at max pressure. "I feel… Bad… I came a lot but… I think I'm just gonna lie here for a sec…" Susie hoarsely mumbles, lying down while she feels the room spin around her.

   "I-I-I think…" Noelle mumbles out dizzily. "I think I'm… Done… I…" She trails off before falling onto her back onto Susie's bed. Her cock flopping onto her abdomen and leaking fluids all over her stomach and chest. She falls asleep on the spot after having cummed her brains out.

   Susie stares forward, unfocused, before she gets on her legs. They wobble and shake, as she hobbles her way to the bathroom to shower.


Kris (10:32 PM)
- hop on deadlock?

Susizilla02 (10:47 PM)
maybe -
cant go on vc, throat's too sore -
hurt my jaw too. -

Kris (10:48 PM)
- what from sucking dick?

Susizilla02 (10:54 PM)
fuck offfff -

Kris (10:54 PM)
- you didnt deny it :)

Susizilla02 (10:56 PM)
fuck you dude
genuinely

Kris (10:57 PM)
- wait
- are you serious?
- did you seriously break your jaw from sucking dick??

Susizilla (11:01 PM)
shut the fuck up dude omg -

Susizilla (11:24 PM)
okay ill tell you what happened but youre never gonna believe me -

Susizilla (11:27 PM)
dont tell anyone or ill kill you -

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