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Summary:

I'm absolutely terrible at doing background and descriptive writing for stories, but I'm insanely good at dialogue
So here's the dialogues from a story I'm currently working on in parts
I'll probably restructure the order eventually, when I have more scenes
structure partially inspired by the naturals by Jennifer Lynn Barnes (pls dont spoil, im only 3 books in 🙃), that's why I put it under the fandom (and I love her but who doesn't!)

This is about a group of kids who at different times were saved from all sorts of situations but couldn't go back to their homes so were given a home by the director of the force (ik horrible name but I'm working on it) to heal and be each other's family, while also getting into trouble once in a while (a lot)

Chapter 1: Help me choose?

Notes:

My first actual story (kinda?) on here

English IS my first language but I never got above a C lol. Mostly cause of writing
Except in 1 exam
Keep in mind that a C is around 50% where I'm from
So...

But yh, I have an always running mind but never really know how to put them down
Please feel free to correct me and give me tips anywhere my writing is floppy

 

Anyways enough ranting
Hope you enjoyy

I do NOT own the rights to percy jackson or the naturals!! That's Rick Riordan and Jennifer Lynn Barnes respectively

(See the end of the chapter for more notes.)

Chapter Text

SCENE: Madon and Andy banter

Blue stood at the centre of the room, biting her fingernails “I mean… we could always consider stalking them.”

Caleb snickered and _ hit him in the leg, but Madon didn’t share his amusement. He sighed, rubbing his chin as if trying to physically push the idea away. “Too risky if we’re caught.” The silence stretched, they’d been trying to come up with a solution to their problem for over an hour now, which didn’t sound very long, but with their deadline fast approaching, they couldn’t afford to lose any more minutes.

Madon spoke again, his voice firmer “Anyways, study time people, let’s get a move on”

A collective groan rose from the room as the children dragged themselves to their feet, shuffling out with all the enthusiasm of prisoners heading back to their cells.

Madon waited until most of them had filed out before turning his attention to the one person still seated.

“Andy. Come on. Prep time.”

Andy didn’t even look up. “Oh, I’m not going.”

Madon closed his eyes briefly, pinching the bridge of his nose, a sigh leaving him, the kind that suggested this was far from the first time this conversation had taken place, “Andy, just because you probably already know everything there is to know doesn’t mean you shouldn’t engage yourself in reading. It’s a useful skill. Keeps you occupied.”

That got her attention. She tilted her head slightly, her expression amused. “Oh no, I do know everything. Besides, what’s the point of reading if I already know what’ll happen next? Kinda defeats the whole purpose, y’know?”

Madon hesitated, t tried a different approach. “Alright. Tell you what, I can get someone to write you a completely new book, something no one’s read before. It’ll take time, but until then, could you at least work on some projects? You love building stuff, try that.”

Andy finally pushed her chair back, stretching as she stood. “Yeah, but the parts I need aren’t here yet.”

“Please,” Madon said, softer now. “For me.”

She paused at that, then groaned dramatically. “Fine.”

Andy started toward the door, but stopped at the frame, glancing back over her shoulder. “But just so you know, I’m offended you think I wouldn’t be able to guess the plot of whatever book you commission.”

A faint smile tugged at Madon’s lips. “We’ll see about that.”

 

 

 

 

Notes:

I originally planned for the story to have a little bit of action but I'm terrible at anything descriptive or non dialogue (I even had help a bit in properly putting this together, cause usually when I write, I write dialogue only style with actions and body movement in asterisks, then put it all together into an actual written style. It just helps me better, especially when i need to pour out my thoughts STAT) so unless I can get someone to assist me with it, I'll probably never add the action parts to this which would mean some parts I want to add, I won't be able to

Or maybe I should, just incase, for the future

Thanks for reading, hope you stick around!!

Not action action but y’know

 

Did I seriously refer to teens as children?? Yes, yes I did. As a teen myself, I will always advocate that anyone under the age of 21 is still a child

Also tbh the only reason why pjo is tagged is cause of the insane amount of female Percy fics I've consumed that have made me obsessed with the myth of Perseus and Andromeda

Guess what Andy’s full name is 🫣🌚