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Bellwood Manor

Summary:

A short story I wrote when I was about thirteen. It's not great, but I wanted to get it out there.

There was a murder at Bellwood Manor, but who murdered who and more importantly, why?

Notes:

Seriously. I was pretty young, and this is a short story. Everything happens real fast and there is little to no build up

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Work Text:

The heavy rain hit the windows of Bellwood Manor like a thousand tiny hammers, relentless and sharp. Inside, the guests were gathered in the grand dining room, the flickering candlelight casting long shadows across the polished wooden floors. The estate had been in the Darnell family for generations, and tonight, it seemed like it would be their last celebration under its roof.
Dr. Charles Darnell, the family patriarch, had invited close friends and family to mark his 65th birthday, though he seemed less eager to celebrate than to remind everyone that this would be the final year he’d be living here. The mansion was being sold, the last of the Darnell legacy to slip away. Rumor had it that Charles was moving out to the city, perhaps to start anew.

As the clock ticked past midnight, the jovial atmosphere shifted. Charles stood to make a toast. His sharp, weathered face, framed by silver hair, appeared grim, as if the weight of his family’s history was pressing down on him.

"To the Darnell name," he began, lifting his glass. “May it live on, even when this house is no more.”

The group responded with a mix of forced cheers and awkward clinking of glasses. There was tension in the air, an unspoken undercurrent that made Evelyn, Charles’s niece, feel uneasy. The Darnells had never been a warm, close-knit family. There were alliances and grudges—secrets that had been buried in the sprawling grounds of Bellwood for decades.
Evelyn was just about to excuse herself when a loud bang echoed through the room. The sound was so sudden and sharp that for a moment, everyone froze.
"What the hell was that?" grumbled Frank, Charles’s younger brother, who was nursing a glass of whiskey in the corner.

“I’ll go check,” said Detective Valerie Hughes, the only one at the party who wasn’t related by blood. She had been invited as a guest of honor for her work with the local police force. She was calm, steady, and quick to act.
The others followed her into the hallway, the distant sound of thunder making the atmosphere feel more oppressive.
The hallway was long, and at the end of it, the library doors were ajar, revealing only a sliver of light from the chandelier above. Valerie moved toward the doors cautiously, holding up her hand to signal for silence. She pushed the door open, and the guests spilled into the room.

A scene of chaos met them. Papers were scattered across the floor, the desk overturned, and at the foot of the grand bookcase lay Charles Darnell, motionless, a crimson stain spreading across his white shirt.
"Charles!" Evelyn cried, rushing forward, her hands trembling as she checked for a pulse. There was none.
A sense of dread washed over the room. Valerie’s eyes scanned the area, quick and calculating.

"He’s been shot," Valerie murmured. "And judging by the trajectory, it was from someone standing just by the door. Someone who knew how to use a gun."
The guests were silent, their faces frozen in shock and fear. No one knew what to say. A murder at a family gathering—unthinkable.
"Stay where you are," Valerie said firmly, stepping back. "No one leaves this room. This is now a crime scene."

Evelyn’s heart pounded in her chest. She had been so caught up in the tension of the evening that she hadn’t even noticed the gun in the corner. The revolver was nestled into the folds of a chair, still warm to the touch. Her breath caught in her throat.
“Someone must’ve been hiding,” she said, her voice shaking. “But who?”
Valerie turned to her. "Do you recognize the gun, Miss Darnell?"
Evelyn’s gaze flicked to the revolver. "It’s Uncle Frank’s," she said. "He always kept it by his side. I don’t think he’s ever been without it."
Frank’s face drained of color. "That’s not—" He stopped short, his mouth running dry. "I never— I didn’t do it, I swear!"

Evelyn wasn’t sure what to believe. Frank had always been the wild one—quick to anger, prone to arguments, and yet he seemed genuinely shocked. But it wasn’t just Frank. The list of suspects was long. The Darnells weren’t a family of strangers, and secrets ran deeper than anyone cared to admit.
Valerie turned to the others. "Tell me exactly what happened before we found the body."
"I... I heard the bang," said Lillian, Charles’s wife. She seemed numb, her eyes vacant. "Then I... I don’t know. I just followed everyone into the hallway. I was in shock."
"And you, Evelyn?" Valerie asked.

Evelyn paused. “I was in the corner with Charles, listening to him talk about selling the house. He seemed... different. Nervous. I didn’t think anything was wrong.”
Valerie nodded, but there was something in her expression—something sharp and unyielding—as if she knew more than she was letting on.
"Who was last to speak with Charles tonight?" Valerie asked, her voice cool.
Everyone looked around at one another, but no one answered.

Frank shuffled uneasily, muttering, "I was in the study, drinking. I don’t know. I didn’t do it."
"Then who did?" Valerie asked, her eyes narrowing.
For a moment, the room was still. Then Lillian spoke again, her voice shaking. "Charles and I... we were having problems. He... he wanted to sell the house, but I didn’t. He didn’t consult me about it. We... We argued earlier. And I said things I shouldn’t have. But I didn’t—" She bit on her red nails.
“You didn’t what, Lillian?” Valerie asked, her tone colder now.
“I didn’t kill him!” Lillian’s voice cracked, tears welling in her eyes. "I loved him, despite everything. We were just going through a rough patch."
Valerie gave a small nod, as if she already expected this. She turned her attention to the rest of the room.
Evelyn stood in the back, her heart pounding in her chest. She thought she knew this family, but something wasn’t right. She glanced at the gun again, her mind racing.
Then she saw it. Red nail polish.

“Wait a minute.” She stepped forward, her voice trembling but determined. “There’s something I didn’t notice before.”
“It wasn’t Frank who killed him," she said, her voice growing more confident. "It was someone else. Someone he trusted. Someone who knew him...”
The room went silent as realization dawned on everyone, when they inspected the gun closely.
And Valerie, now understanding the true nature of the murder, took a deep breath and turned to Lillian.
“It was you,” Valerie said quietly. “Wasn’t it?”

Lillian’s face twisted in fury. "You don’t know anything," she hissed, backing away.
Lillian’s back hit the wall, her breath coming in short gasps. “You don’t know what you’re saying,” she whispered, her eyes darting to the gun.
Valerie took a slow step forward. “I think I do.”

The tension in the room was suffocating. The candlelight flickered, casting eerie shadows over Lillian’s pale face. The red polish on her nails was unmistakable—smudged, a faint streak of it staining the revolver’s handle.
“It was an accident,” Lillian said suddenly, her voice raw. “I just wanted to scare him. Make him listen for once. But he—he grabbed my wrist, and the gun went off—”
A heavy silence followed. Evelyn clenched her fists, watching Lillian’s facade crumble.
Valerie exhaled. “Then why hide it?”

Lillian’s lips trembled, but before she could answer, a slow, deliberate clap echoed through the library.
Everyone turned.
Charles Darnell, bloody and grinning, pushed himself up against the bookcase, wheezing through gritted teeth.
“You almost got away with it, my dear,” he rasped, his eyes gleaming with something dark, something victorious. “But you should know... the Darnells never go down that easy.”
Lillian gasped, stumbling backward. Evelyn felt the room spin.
Charles chuckled—weak, but taunting. “I knew you’d try something tonight.” He lifted a shaky hand, revealing a small recording device smeared with blood. “And now... they all know, too.”
Lillian’s face drained of color.

The front doors burst open as officers stormed inside, summoned long before the night had even begun.
Valerie crossed her arms. “Happy birthday, Dr. Darnell.”
Charles coughed, but his smirk remained. “Oh, it’s one I won’t forget.”
And with that, the Darnell name lived on, in the newspapers and in history, just as Charles had planned.

Notes:

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