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The key arrived in Carol's hand like a small miracle—cold metal, unremarkable, and yet the most beautiful thing she'd touched in months. The DMV clerk had barely looked at her as he slid it across the counter with the practiced indifference of someone who processed too many lives gone temporarily wrong.
"You're all set, Ms. Sturka. The interlock's been removed from your vehicle."
Carol closed her fist around the key, nodded once, and walked out of that fluorescent purgatory into the Albuquerque afternoon sun. February in New Mexico always felt like a liar—bright and promising, warm enough to make you forget that winter still had teeth. She stood in the parking lot for a moment, just breathing, looking at her car. Her car. Not the machine that had humiliated her with its breathalyzer ritual every single time she needed milk or coffee or to escape her own house.
She got in, turned the key in the ignition, and the engine started. Just like that. No plastic tube to blow into and no robotic voice telling her whether she was permitted to drive her own goddamn car.
Carol Sturka was free.
Well. As free as a woman could be when her wife was thirty-four weeks pregnant with a baby made from Carol's own eggs—eggs she'd contributed before the DUI, before the court-mandated classes, before she'd promised Helen and herself and anyone who'd listen that she was done. Done with vodka, done with wine, done with bourbon and the beautiful oblivion that came with it.
Eight months sober. Eight months of white-knuckling through book deadlines and anxiety spirals and the creeping terror of impending motherhood without the warm buffer of alcohol to smooth the edges. Eight months of watching Helen's body transform, of attending doctors’ appointments, of reading parenting books she couldn't retain, of lying awake at 3 AM wondering what the fuck they'd been thinking.
But today. Today she had her key back.
Carol drove home faster than she should have, which Helen would have scolded her for if she'd known. The house came into view at the end of the cul-de-sac—a sprawling adobe-style home in the North Valley that they'd bought three years ago, back when Carol's first novel was still riding the surprise success wave and everything seemed possible. The terracotta-colored stucco and rounded southwestern architecture had sealed the deal for Helen, who'd fallen in love with the arched doorways and the way the late afternoon light turned the walls golden. Three bedrooms upstairs, Carol's writing studio on the ground floor with its own entrance, a backyard that Helen had grand plans for. It was more house than two people needed, but they'd talked about babies even then, in that abstract way couples do when the future is theoretical. Who would carry. Whose eggs. Whether they even wanted kids at all.
It had taken two years to decide. Another year to find the right donor—the "perfect" donor, as Helen had called him, though Carol privately thought perfection was a myth and they'd just gotten lucky with a med student who looked vaguely like Helen and had no family history of addiction. That last part had been Helen's quiet requirement, never spoken aloud but clear in the way she'd vetoed three otherwise suitable candidates. And then the question of who would actually be pregnant.
That decision had been made for them, really, the night Carol wrapped her car around a mailbox at 1 AM after finishing a bottle of Tito's and deciding she needed cigarettes right now. No one was hurt—just the mailbox, the car's front bumper, and Carol's dignity. But the breathalyzer didn't care about dignity. Neither did the judge.
Helen had cried. Not in front of Carol, but Carol heard her in the bathroom that night, muffled sobs that cut deeper than any lecture. And when Carol finally worked up the courage to say, "I think you should carry the baby," Helen had just nodded. Like she'd already known. Like she'd been waiting for Carol to catch up.
"I'll get sober," Carol had promised. "I'll be sober the whole pregnancy. I'll be sober when she's born. I'll—"
"I know," Helen had said, and kissed her forehead, and that was that.
So Helen carried the baby made from Carol's eggs and some stranger's sperm, and Carol stayed sober, and the interlock device in her car beeped and humiliated her twice a day for six months, and now—
Now Carol burst through the front door like she'd won the lottery.
"It's gone!" she announced to the living room, to the half-painted nursery down the hall, to wherever Helen was. "The fucking thing is gone!"
"Language," Helen called from the kitchen, but she was laughing. Carol could hear it in her voice.
Carol found her standing at the counter, one hand on her lower back, the other slicing an apple with the careful precision of someone who'd read too many articles about proper prenatal nutrition. At thirty-four weeks, Helen looked like she was smuggling a basketball under her oversized cardigan—one of Carol's old ones that Helen had claimed months ago and refused to give back.
"Show me," Helen said.
Carol dangled the key like a trophy. "Freedom. Sweet, unmediated automotive freedom."
Helen smiled, that soft maternal smile she'd developed somewhere in the second trimester, the one that made Carol's chest ache with something she couldn't name. "I'm proud of you."
"For what? Successfully not drinking for eight months? The bar is literally on the floor."
"The bar is wherever we put it," Helen said, setting down the knife and waddling—there was no other word for it—around the counter to kiss Carol. "And you cleared it. That's what matters."
Carol kissed her back, tasting apple and chapstick and the particular sweetness that was just Helen. She let her hand rest on the swell of Helen's belly, feeling the baby shift inside. Their daughter. Carol's genetic material, Helen's body, some stranger's contribution reduced to a vial and a signature.
"Hi, baby," Carol murmured against Helen's stomach, the way Helen had coached her to do. "Your mama's not a felon anymore. Well, she's still technically a felon, but a felon with full driving privileges."
"You're not a felon," Helen said, running her fingers through Carol's hair. "Misdemeanors don't count."
"Tell that to the DMV."
Helen pulled back, studying Carol's face with that x-ray vision she'd always had, the ability to see through sarcasm and deflection straight to the fear underneath. "We have the appointment in an hour. Are you ready?"
The ultrasound. Right. Carol had almost forgotten in the euphoria of key retrieval. Dr. Laxmi, the thirty-four-week check, the measurements and heartbeat and all the clinical confirmation that yes, there was indeed a tiny human preparing to exit Helen's body in approximately six weeks and ruin both their lives forever.
"Ready as I'll ever be," Carol said, which was not at all.
The drive to Dr. Laxmi's office should have been pleasant. Carol had her key back, Helen was glowing in that annoyingly literal way pregnant people did, and the February sun made Albuquerque look almost beautiful. But Carol's hands were tight on the steering wheel, and her mind was racing through every catastrophic possibility the ultrasound might reveal.
"You're doing the thing," Helen observed from the passenger seat.
"What thing?"
"The spiraling thing. I can hear it from here."
Carol glanced at her. "I'm not spiraling. I'm driving."
"You're white-knuckling the steering wheel and breathing through your nose like you're trying not to have a panic attack."
"Maybe I'm just concentrating on traffic."
"It's 2 PM on a Tuesday. There is no traffic."
Carol loosened her grip slightly. "Fine. I'm mildly concerned about the appointment. Happy?"
"Why? Laxmi said everything looked good at the last visit."
"Laxmi says everything looks good at every visit. That's literally her job. To be optimistic and soothing so we don't freak out."
"Or," Helen said patiently, "everything actually is good, and you're borrowing trouble."
"I don't borrow trouble. Trouble follows me around like a loyal dog."
Helen laughed, that warm sound that made Carol feel momentarily less like she was drowning. "We're going to be fine. The baby's going to be fine. You're going to be fine."
"You can't know that."
"I can know that right now, in this moment, we're fine. That's enough."
Carol wanted to argue, but Helen had that serene pregnancy confidence that made arguing seem petty. Instead, Carol changed the subject.
"So have you thought any more about names?"
Helen's face lit up. She'd been campaigning for name discussions for weeks, and Carol had been deflecting with the skill of someone who'd made a career out of avoiding commitment.
"Actually, yes," Helen said, shifting in her seat to face Carol more fully. "I have a few ideas."
"Please tell me you're not going to suggest we name her after one of the Wycaro characters."
Helen's silence was damning.
"Helen. No."
"Why not? They're good names! Lucasia is beautiful—"
"Lucasia is a romantasy heroine who sails ships across purple sand. Our daughter is not a bodice-ripper protagonist."
"What about Raban? That's—"
"Raban is a pirate. A male pirate."
"Raban is a woman," Helen said quietly.
Carol went silent for a beat.
"Well," she said finally. "Published Raban is a man. And either way, I'm not naming my daughter after a swashbuckling corsair who spends half the book strategically removing people's corsets."
Helen crossed her arms, which was difficult given the belly. "You're being deliberately obtuse."
"I'm being realistic. Those are fictional characters in a commercial fantasy series about sailing ships and forbidden romance. I'm not naming my actual human daughter after someone from a romantasy novel."
"Lucasia's character arc is about agency and empowerment," Helen said primly.
"Lucasia's character arc is about agency, empowerment, and a very attractive pirate. Let's be honest about what we're working with here."
Helen was quiet for a moment, then sighed. "Fine. Not Wycaro names. But I do have other ideas."
"I'm listening."
Helen took a breath, and Carol recognized the tone—she'd been rehearsing this. "What about Nora?"
Carol considered. "As in Ephron? Or Ibsen's A Doll's House?"
"Either. Both. It's a strong name. Classic. It means 'light.'"
"It also means our daughter will spend her entire life explaining that yes, it's spelled N-O-R-A, not with an H, and no, we didn't name her after the dead aunt."
"We don't have a dead aunt named Nora."
"We might someday. Murphy's Law."
Helen sighed. "Okay. What about Vera?"
"As in Wang? The designer?"
"As in the Latin for 'truth' or the Slavic for 'faith.' It's elegant. Simple. She could be a Vera."
Carol drummed her fingers on the wheel. "She could also be a sixty-year-old Russian piano teacher who hits kids' knuckles with a ruler. Very stern. Very disappointed in everyone."
"You're impossible."
“Oh… come on. Vera Sturka sounds like someone who defected during the Cold War and has opinions about Shostakovich."
"That's oddly specific."
"I'm a writer. Specificity is my job."
Helen was quiet for a moment, and Carol thought maybe she'd won, maybe they could table this conversation until after the baby was born and Carol had no more excuses. But then Helen played her trump card.
"What about Beatrice?"
Carol almost hit the brakes. "Beatrice?"
"It means 'she who brings happiness.' Dante's Beatrice. Beloved. Divine guide. And it's beautiful."
"It's also a mouthful. Beatrice Sturka sounds like a Victorian governess who died of consumption."
"It has great nickname potential. Bea. Tris. Birdie."
"Birdie?" Carol's voice cracked. "You want our daughter to go through middle school as Birdie? That's basically asking for a wedgie."
Helen turned to look at her fully, and there was something soft and serious in her expression. "Carol. She needs a name. We can't just keep calling her 'the baby.'"
"Why not? It's accurate."
"Because she's a person. She's going to be our person. And she deserves a name that means something."
Carol's throat tightened. This was the part she couldn't articulate, the fear that thrummed under everything—that naming the baby made it real, made her responsible, made her someone's mother, and Carol Sturka could barely mother herself most days. How was she supposed to be trusted with an entire new human?
"I don't know," Carol said quietly. "I don't know what to call her. I don't—" She stopped. Swallowed. "You pick."
"Carol—"
"No, seriously. You pick. You're carrying her. You're doing all the work. You should get to name her."
"We're both her mothers."
"Biologically, sure. But you're—" Carol gestured vaguely at Helen's entire torso. "You're doing this. I'm just... along for the ride. So you pick the name. Whichever one you want. Nora, Vera, Beatrice. I'll like whatever you like."
It was a cop-out and they both knew it. But Helen, bless her, didn't push. She just reached over and squeezed Carol's hand.
"Okay," Helen said softly. "We'll figure it out."
They pulled into the medical plaza parking lot, and Carol killed the engine. For a moment, they just sat there, Carol's hand still in Helen's, the baby moving between them like a secret.
"Thank you," Helen said. "For getting sober. For being here. For trying."
Carol looked at their joined hands, at the simple gold band on Helen's finger that matched the one on Carol's. "I'm terrified I'm going to fuck this up."
"I know."
"Like, genuinely, bone-deep terrified."
"I know," Helen said again. "But you won't. And even if you stumble, we'll figure it out together. That's what we do."
Carol wanted to believe her. God, she wanted to believe her. Instead, she squeezed Helen's hand once more and said, "Let's go see our nameless daughter."
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Dr. Laxmi's office smelled like antiseptic and false hope—that particular medical-grade optimism that Carol had learned to distrust. But Dr. Laxmi herself was warm, efficient, and had the kind of calm competence that made even Carol's catastrophic thinking settle down a notch.
"Thirty-four weeks!" Dr. Laxmi said as Helen settled onto the examination table, her belly exposed and shining with ultrasound gel. "We're in the home stretch now. How are you feeling, Helen?"
"Tired," Helen admitted. "And my back hurts. But good. Mostly good."
"That's normal. Baby's putting a lot of pressure on your lower back now. We can talk about some stretches that might help." Dr. Laxmi glanced at Carol, who was hovering near the wall like she might bolt at any moment. "And how are you doing, Carol?"
"Concerned," Carol said honestly. "Is that normal?"
Dr. Laxmi smiled. "Also very normal. Let's take a look and see how your girl is doing."
The ultrasound wand moved across Helen's belly, and the screen flickered to life—grainy black and white shapes that Carol's brain struggled to parse into anything resembling a baby. But then Dr. Laxmi pointed, narrating the geography of their daughter.
"There's her head. Good size. And here's her spine—see that? Perfect alignment. Heart rate looks excellent. She's measuring right on track for thirty-four weeks."
Carol stared at the screen, at the tiny human who was somehow both impossibly abstract and devastatingly real. That was their daughter. That flickering movement was her heart. Those were her tiny hands.
"Is she—" Carol's voice came out rough. "Is everything okay?"
Dr. Laxmi met her eyes. "Everything looks great, Carol. Really. I know it's scary, but you're doing all the right things. Helen's healthy, the baby's healthy, and we're going to keep monitoring closely these last few weeks. But right now? You're right on track."
Helen was crying, the happy kind, tears sliding down toward her ears as she stared at the screen. Carol moved closer, took her hand, and felt something crack open in her chest—not fear this time, but something bigger and more terrifying.
Love. Stupid, reckless, all-consuming love for a person she hadn't even met yet.
"Six weeks," Helen whispered. "Six more weeks and we meet her."
"Six weeks," Carol echoed, and tried not to think about all the ways she could fail this tiny person in six weeks, six months, six years.
Dr. Laxmi printed out photos, gave them instructions about what to watch for, reminded them about the tour of the hospital's maternity ward they'd scheduled, and sent them on their way with reassurances that everything was perfect.
Everything was perfect.
Carol held onto those words during the drive home, even as her brain catalogued all the ways perfection could shatter.
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The house was quiet when they got home, the kind of quiet that felt temporary—like it was waiting for something to fill it. Carol helped Helen out of the car, watching the way she moved now, careful and deliberate, one hand always supporting her lower back.
"I'm not an invalid," Helen said, catching Carol's hovering.
"I know. I'm just—"
"Hovering."
"Observing."
"That's the same thing."
Carol's phone rang before she could argue. Val's name flashed on the screen, and Carol considered letting it go to voicemail. But Val had a sixth sense for being ignored, and the follow-up calls would only get more aggressive.
"I have to take this," Carol said.
Helen nodded, already heading toward the kitchen. "I'll make tea."
Carol answered on the fourth ring. "Val."
"Carol! Finally. I was beginning to think you'd blocked my number."
"The thought has crossed my mind."
"Charming as ever. How's the book coming?"
Carol walked into her study—a converted bedroom on the ground floor with windows that looked out onto the backyard Helen kept threatening to landscape. Her desk was covered in notebooks, Post-its, and three different drafts of chapters she'd printed and marked up with increasingly frustrated red pen.
"It's coming," Carol said.
"That's what you said three weeks ago."
"And it's still true. Things take time, Val. You can't rush art."
"Art, she says. Carol, you write romantasy novels about pirates sailing purple sand. I love them, your readers love them, but let's not pretend you're Dostoyevsky."
"Dostoyevsky didn't have deadlines this aggressive."
"Dostoyevsky also didn't have a three-book deal with a major publisher who's already scheduled your release date and printed advance reader copies with 'coming soon' plastered all over them."
Carol sat down at her desk, rubbing her temples. "I'm aware of the timeline."
"Are you? Because the editorial team needs the final draft in six weeks, Carol. Six weeks. That's not a suggestion, that's a contractual obligation."
"Six weeks. Got it. Anything else?"
Val's sigh was audible even through the phone. "How's Helen?"
"Pregnant. Very pregnant. Due in six weeks, coincidentally."
"And you're planning to finish a novel while simultaneously becoming a parent?"
"I'm planning to try."
"Carol—"
"Val, I love you, but I'm hanging up now. I promise I'll send you something soon. A few chapters at least. Give the editorial team something to chew on while I figure out the ending."
"You don't know the ending?"
"I know an ending. I'm just not sure it's the right ending."
"Well, figure it out. Fast. And Carol?"
"Yeah?"
"Congratulations. On the baby. I know I don't say that enough."
Carol's throat tightened unexpectedly. "Thanks, Val."
She hung up and stared at her computer screen. The cursor blinked at her, accusatory and patient. Chapter Twenty-Three of Tides of Wycaro (working title, subject to change, currently hated by everyone who'd read it) sat half-finished, Lucasia trapped mid-scene in the hold of a ship Carol hadn't decided whether to sink or save.
Helen appeared in the doorway, two mugs of tea in hand. "How's Val?"
"Persistent. Annoying. Justified in her annoyance."
"How's the book?"
"Also persistent. Also annoying. Less justified."
Helen set one mug on Carol's desk, careful to avoid the paper chaos. "You haven't let me read any of it yet."
"Because it's terrible."
"You always say that."
"This time I mean it."
Helen settled into the armchair in the corner—the reading chair Carol had bought her two Christmases ago that Helen now used primarily for naps. "Tell me about it. What's happening with Lucasia?"
Carol took a sip of tea. Chamomile. Pregnancy-safe and vaguely disappointing. "She's stuck."
"Stuck how?"
"Stuck in the sense that I've written her into a corner and I don't know how to get her out without either killing half the supporting cast or resorting to a deus ex machina so contrived it would make the gods themselves cringe."
"What does Raban think?"
Carol's jaw tightened. "Raban is very supportive. As always."
Helen looked at her for a long moment, that x-ray vision thing again. "You could change it, you know. It's not too late. The book isn't published yet."
"Val would murder me. The timeline's already impossible."
"The timeline is always impossible. That's never stopped you before."
"Helen—"
"I'm just saying. If you wanted to—"
"I don't." Carol's voice came out sharper than intended. "I don't want to change it. It's fine the way it is. Raban is fine the way he is. The story works."
Helen was quiet, cradling her tea. "Okay."
"I should write. Val's going to be breathing down my neck if I don't send her something by the end of the week."
"Okay," Helen said again. She stood, kissed the top of Carol's head, and left without another word.
Carol waited until she heard Helen's footsteps fade before opening the document. Twenty-two chapters done. Eight to go. Six weeks until the baby. Six weeks until the manuscript was due.
No pressure.
She scrolled to where she'd left off—Lucasia's confrontation with Peregrina about the storm, the decision to make port or risk the open sea. Carol read the last paragraph she'd written, then placed her fingers on the keyboard.
Lucasia couldn't ignore her navigator's apprehension. Dismissing O'Riordan, she moved to her bed, on which Raban's topcoat was strewn. She picked it up and buried her face in the folds of fabric, searching for his scent. There was barely any left. She draped the coat over her torrent of crimson hair, a makeshift shield against the pale, murderous light of the twin moons.
The moons had betrayed her before—during The Sickness, when moonsburn had ravaged her crew and left Lucasia gasping in agony, her skin cracked and weeping. But this was different. This was Peregrina's fear, real and immediate, and Lucasia could not afford to be reckless. Not now. Not with half her crew already sick, and the cyclone bearing down from the Gulf of All Sighs.
She thought of Raban—his hands, rough and certain, warming the waldoneve salve between his palms before pressing it to her burns. "For things to heal, they must first hurt, ma chérie," he'd said, and she'd wanted to believe him. Wanted to believe that pain was temporary, that scars were just proof of survival.
But Raban was gone now. Dead in the Battle of Nepenthe, his body claimed by the purple waves before she could even say goodbye. And Lucasia was left with nothing but his coat and the impossible task of leading a crew through a storm she wasn't sure they'd survive.
"Captain!" Peregrina's voice cut through her thoughts, urgent and afraid. "The cyclone is gaining speed. We must decide—port or open sea. We cannot delay."
Lucasia stood, letting the coat fall from her shoulders. She moved to the porthole, staring out at the churning purple sand, the twin moons casting their sickly green glow across the horizon.
Port meant safety. Port meant land, shelter, a chance to regroup.
But port also meant—
Carol stopped. Stared at the screen. Deleted the last sentence.
But port also meant—
No. That wasn't it either.
She tried again.
But port also meant surrender. And Lucasia had never been good at surrender.
Better. Maybe. Carol read it back, frowning. Was that in character? Would Lucasia see it as surrender or strategy? And did it even matter when Carol had no idea what happened next?
She closed her eyes, trying to visualize the scene. Lucasia standing at the porthole. The storm outside. Peregrina waiting for orders. The crew sick and afraid. Raban's ghost haunting every decision.
Nothing came.
Carol opened her eyes and stared at the blinking cursor. Five hundred words. She'd written five hundred words in two hours, and half of them were garbage.
She saved the document, closed her laptop, and stood up. Her tea had gone cold.
She found Helen in the nursery, paintbrush in hand, rolling soft yellow paint across the wall with the focused determination of someone who'd decided productivity was the answer to anxiety. There were already streaks of paint on her forearms, a smudge on her cheek, and her cardigan—Carol's cardigan—looked like it had been through a war.
"Helen."
Helen didn't turn around. "I'm almost done with this wall."
"You're supposed to be resting."
"I'm painting, not running a marathon."
"Dr. Laxmi said you should be taking it easy."
"Dr. Laxmi also said light activity is fine." Helen dipped the roller back into the paint tray, her movements careful and deliberate. "Besides, this needs to get done."
"It can wait."
"Can it? The baby's coming in six weeks, Carol. Six weeks. And we haven't even assembled the crib yet. Or organized the closet. Or—"
"Helen." Carol crossed the room and gently took the roller from her hands. "It'll get done. I promise. Everything will be ready when she gets here."
"You keep saying that."
"Because it's true."
"You also said you'd paint the nursery three weeks ago."
Carol looked at the half-finished wall, at the crib still in its box in the corner, at the bags of baby clothes they hadn't sorted through yet. "I've been working on the book."
"I know."
"Val's breathing down my neck about the deadline."
"I know."
"And I'm—" Carol stopped, swallowed the words she couldn't quite say. Terrified. Overwhelmed. Convinced I'm going to fail at all of this.
Helen touched her cheek, the one without paint. "You weren't writing just now, were you?"
"I tried. It's not—" Carol gestured vaguely. "The words aren't coming."
"They'll come."
"What if they don't? What if I can't finish the book and the baby comes and I'm stuck with a half-written manuscript and a newborn I have no idea how to take care of?"
Helen's expression softened. “We’ll manage, I promise.”
Carol wanted to believe her. Instead, she kissed her forehead—carefully avoiding the paint—and said, "Go take a shower. I'll finish this wall."
"Carol—"
"I mean it. You're covered in paint and you smell like turpentine. Go. I've got this."
Helen hesitated, then nodded. "Thank you."
Carol watched her go, then turned back to the wall. She picked up the roller, dipped it in the paint tray, and started where Helen had left off. The motion was soothing—mindless and rhythmic. Up, down, reload. Up, down, reload.
She could do this. Paint a wall. Assemble a crib. Finish a book. Raise a child.
One impossible thing at a time.
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They ate dinner on the couch, plates balanced on their laps, The Golden Girls playing on the TV. Helen had insisted on making pasta—nothing fancy, just spaghetti with marinara—but Carol could tell she was tired. The way she moved slower than usual, the way she kept shifting positions trying to get comfortable.
"Your back still hurting?" Carol asked between bites.
"A little. It's normal. The baby's putting pressure on everything."
"You should prop yourself up with pillows."
"I have pillows, Carol. I'm basically a pillow fort at this point."
On screen, Dorothy was delivering a sarcastic one-liner to Rose. Helen laughed, and Carol tried to focus on the show, on the pasta, on anything except the low-grade anxiety that had taken up permanent residence in her chest.
"Do you think we're ready?" Helen asked during the credits.
"For what?"
"For her. For being parents."
Carol set her plate on the coffee table. "Honestly? No. I don't think anyone's ever actually ready. I think you just... do it and hope you don't fuck it up too badly."
"That's very reassuring."
"You asked."
Helen smiled, tired but genuine. "You're going to be a good mom, you know."
"You can't possibly know that."
"I can. Because you care. Because you're terrified of fucking it up, which means you'll actually try not to. That's more than a lot of people can say."
Carol looked at her—at Helen, who believed in her even when Carol didn't believe in herself, who was carrying their daughter and painting nursery walls and still somehow had faith that they'd figure this out.
"I love you," Carol said.
"I know." Helen leaned against her, and Carol wrapped an arm around her shoulders, careful of her belly. "I love you too. Even when you're being dramatically pessimistic."
"I'm not dramatic."
"Carol. You literally just compared parenting to hoping you don't fuck up too badly."
“I’m just being realistic.”
"Uh-huh." Helen shifted again, wincing slightly. "God, my back is killing me."
"Want me to rub it?"
"No, it's okay. I think I just need to lie down." Helen stood slowly, one hand pressed to her lower back. "I'm exhausted anyway. Growing a human is apparently very tiring."
"Who knew?"
They cleaned up the dishes together—Helen rinsing, Carol loading the dishwasher—and made their way upstairs. Helen took forever brushing her teeth, and Carol changed into an old t-shirt and boxer shorts, her standard sleeping uniform. When Helen finally came to bed, she practically collapsed onto the mattress.
"Six weeks," she murmured, already half-asleep. "Six more weeks and we meet her."
"Six weeks," Carol echoed.
Helen was asleep within minutes, her breathing evening out into the deep rhythm of someone too exhausted to stay awake. Carol lay next to her, staring at the ceiling, her mind racing through everything that still needed to be done. Finish the book. Assemble the crib. Figure out how to be a mother. Stay sober. Don't fuck it up.
She was still awake an hour later when exhaustion finally started to drag her under. Her eyes were heavy, her thoughts fuzzy and disconnected. She was just drifting off—that strange twilight space between waking and sleeping—when she heard it.
A sound. Soft at first. Almost nothing.
Helen, whimpering.
Carol's eyes snapped open. "Helen?"
Another sound—sharper this time. A gasp of pain.
"Helen." Carol sat up, adrenaline flooding her system. "What's wrong?"
Helen's eyes were squeezed shut, her hand pressed to her stomach. "It hurts."
"What hurts? Your back?"
"No—" Helen sucked in a breath, her whole body tensing. "Oh god. Carol. Something's wrong."
Carol threw off the covers, her hands shaking. "Okay. Okay, it's okay. Just—breathe. Tell me what's happening."
"I don't know. It just—" Helen gasped again, and this time Carol saw it—the way her belly contracted, hard and tight. "Oh god. Carol, I think—I think these are contractions."
"Contractions?" Carol's voice pitched up. "You're only thirty-four weeks. You're not supposed to—we still have six weeks—"
"I know!" Helen's voice cracked. "Carol, something's wrong. Call—call Dr. Laxmi. We need to go to the hospital. Now."
Carol was already moving, grabbing her phone, fumbling for pants, her brain screaming at her to think to focus to do something.
Helen cried out again, and Carol's hands wouldn't stop shaking.
"I'm calling," Carol said. "I'm calling right now. Just—hold on. Hold on, okay?"
The phone rang once. Twice. Three times.
"Come on," Carol whispered. "Come on, pick up, pick up—"
Dr. Laxmi's voice, groggy and professional: "This is Dr. Laxmi."
"It's Carol Sturka. Helen's having contractions. What do we do?"
A pause. Then: "How far apart are the contractions?"
Carol looked at Helen, who was breathing through another one, her face twisted in pain. "I don't know. Maybe—five minutes? Less?"
"Get her to the hospital. Now. I'll meet you there."
The line went dead.
Carol grabbed the hospital bag they'd packed weeks ago—sitting ready by the door like a promise they'd hoped they wouldn't need this soon. She helped Helen out of bed, and Helen was shaking, crying, saying "it's too early, it's too early," and Carol was trying to be calm, trying to be strong, trying to be anything other than absolutely fucking terrified.
"It's going to be okay," Carol said, even though she had no idea if that was true. "We're going to the hospital. Dr. Laxmi will be there. They'll know what to do."
They made it down the stairs, Helen leaning heavily on Carol, stopping twice when contractions hit. The car keys felt foreign in Carol's hand. Everything felt foreign—the house, the night air, the steering wheel.
Helen buckled herself in with trembling hands. "Carol. I'm scared."
Carol started the engine, her own hands white-knuckled on the wheel. "I know. Me too. But we're going to get you there. We're going to get help. It's going to be okay."
She pulled out of the driveway faster than she should have, the streetlights blurring past, and all Carol could think was: please. Please let them both be okay. Please.
Helen's hand found hers across the center console, squeezing tight.
Carol held on and drove.
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The emergency entrance of Presbyterian Hospital was too bright, and too loud. Carol half-carried Helen through the automatic doors, and a nurse with a wheelchair materialized out of nowhere like she'd been waiting for them.
"How far apart are the contractions?" the nurse asked, all business, already taking Helen's weight from Carol.
"Five minutes. Maybe less. I don't know." Carol's voice sounded strange to her own ears—too high, too thin. "She's only thirty-four weeks. It's too early. Dr. Laxmi is supposed to meet us here—"
"We've been notified. Dr. Laxmi is on her way. Let's get you into triage."
Everything moved too fast and too slow at the same time. Fluorescent lights overhead. Squeaking wheels. Helen's hand crushing Carol's fingers as another contraction hit. A blood pressure cuff. Monitors beeping. Questions Carol couldn't focus on.
"When did the contractions start?"
"I don't know. Maybe an hour ago? Less?"
"Any bleeding?"
"I don't—I don't think so. Helen?"
Helen couldn't answer. She was breathing through another contraction, her face pale and slick with sweat.
More nurses. A resident Carol didn't recognize. Someone hooking Helen up to a fetal monitor, and suddenly there it was—their daughter's heartbeat, too fast, frantic, filling the room with its electronic rhythm.
"Fetal heart rate is elevated," someone said. "One-seventy."
"That's bad, right?" Carol's voice cracked. "That's too fast?"
No one answered her.
A different nurse—younger, apologetic—touched Carol's arm. "Ma'am, we need you to step out for a moment while we examine—"
"No." Carol's voice came out sharp. "I'm not leaving her."
"Carol." Helen's voice was weak but clear. "It's okay. Let them work."
"Helen—"
"Please. I need you to let them work."
Carol stepped back, her hands shaking, and watched as they swarmed around Helen—checking dilation, adjusting monitors, conferring in low voices that Carol couldn't quite hear. The fetal heart rate kept climbing. One-seventy-five. One-eighty.
And then a man in scrubs appeared in the doorway—tall, broad-shouldered, with kind eyes and an air of calm competence that felt utterly wrong for the chaos erupting around them.
"Mrs. Sturka?" He had a slight accent. "I'm Dr. Koumba Diabaté. I'm the OB on call tonight."
Carol stared at him. "Where's Dr. Laxmi?"
"Dr. Laxmi is on her way, but she's coming from the North Valley. I'm here now, and I'm familiar with your case. I've been reviewing Mrs. Umstead's file with Dr. Laxmi throughout the pregnancy."
"I don't know you."
"I understand. But I promise you, I know your wife's medical history. I know this is a thirty-four-week twin pregnancy"
"It's not twins," Carol said automatically. "Just one baby. With my eggs, my—" She stopped. That didn't matter. None of that mattered. "Where is Dr. Laxmi?"
"Fifteen minutes away. But Mrs. Umstead can't wait fifteen minutes." His voice was gentle but firm. "Your wife is in active labor. The baby is in distress. We need to do an emergency C section now."
The words hit Carol like a physical blow. "Now?"
"Her blood pressure is spiking. The baby's heart rate is dangerously high. If we wait, we risk losing them both."
Losing them both.
The room tilted.
"No." Carol's voice didn't sound like her own. "No, we wait for Dr. Laxmi. She knows Helen. She knows the case. You said she's fifteen minutes away—"
"Carol." Helen's hand found hers, weak and trembling. "Let him help me."
"But he's not—"
"I don't care." Helen's eyes were wide with fear, and Carol saw it then—the way Helen was trying to be brave and failing, the way she was terrified and in pain and trusting Carol to make the right call. "Please. I just want her to be okay. I want us to be okay."
Dr. Diabaté stepped closer, his voice low and steady. "I know you're scared. I know you want Dr. Laxmi. But I have been doing this for twenty years, and I promise you—I will take care of your wife and your baby. Dr. Laxmi will be here soon, and she will assist. But right now, we need to move."
Carol looked at Helen—at her wife, who was carrying their daughter, who was in pain and terrified and waiting for Carol to say yes.
"Okay," Carol whispered. "Okay."
Everything accelerated after that.
Consent forms Carol couldn't read through the blur of panic. Helen being wheeled away toward the OR. A nurse pressing scrubs into Carol's hands—"You can observe from the gallery"—and pointing her toward a changing room.
Carol's hands wouldn't stop shaking as she pulled on the scrubs. The fabric felt wrong. Everything felt wrong.
By the time she made it to the observation gallery—a small room with a window looking down into the operating room—they already had Helen on the table. Carol pressed her hands against the glass, watching as they draped her, prepped her, and moved with choreographed efficiency that would have been beautiful if it weren't so terrifying.
She could see Helen's face above the surgical drape—pale, afraid, her eyes searching the room like she was looking for Carol and couldn't find her.
"I'm here," Carol whispered to the glass, knowing Helen couldn't hear her. "I'm right here."
Dr. Diabaté was at the table now, scrubbed and gowned, speaking to Helen in a voice Carol couldn't hear but could see was meant to be reassuring. Helen nodded at whatever he said, and then—
The epidural. Carol watched them position Helen, watched her curl forward over her massive belly, watched the anesthesiologist work with steady hands.
And then the cutting started.
Carol had thought she could handle this. She'd thought—stupidly, naively—that watching from the gallery would be easier than being in the room, that the glass would create enough distance to keep her from falling apart.
She was wrong.
There was so much blood. They worked quickly, efficiently, Dr. Diabaté's hands moving with practiced precision, but there was so much blood, and Carol couldn't look away, couldn't breathe, couldn't think past the roaring in her ears that said something's wrong something's wrong something's wrong.
"BP's dropping," someone said—Carol could hear them through a speaker in the gallery. "Ninety over sixty."
"She's hemorrhaging," another voice. "Get me—"
Carol's vision blurred. She gripped the edge of the window ledge, her knuckles white.
And then—movement at the OR door. Dr. Laxmi, scrubbed and gowned, rushing to the table.
"I'm here," Carol heard her say. "Koumba, status?"
"Placental abruption. Massive hemorrhage. Baby's out but we need to—"
The rest of Carol's world narrowed to a single sound: a cry. High-pitched, thin, furious.
Their daughter.
A nurse moved past with a tiny bundle—impossibly tiny, purple and slick and screaming—toward what Carol assumed was the warming station. Carol couldn't see her clearly. Couldn't see anything clearly. There were too many people, too much happening, and all she could focus on was Helen's face above the drape, so pale it was almost gray.
"Laxmi?" Helen's voice, faint and thready through the speaker.
"I'm here, Helen. I'm right here."
"The baby—"
"She's breathing. She's strong. You did so good."
"Carol—where's Carol—"
"She's watching. She's right there in the gallery. She can see you."
But Helen's eyes were fluttering closed.
"Helen?" Dr. Laxmi's voice changed—still calm but with an edge Carol recognized as fear. "Helen, stay with me."
"BP's dropping again. Seventy over forty."
"She's not clotting—"
"Get me four units, type O-neg, and call for—"
Carol couldn't hear the rest over the roaring in her ears. She watched them work—watched Dr. Laxmi and Dr. Diabaté move in tandem, watched nurses rush in and out with bags of blood and equipment Carol didn't recognize—and knew, with horrible certainty, that they were losing.
Helen's face was gray now. Actually gray.
"Come on, Helen," Dr. Laxmi was saying. Carol could see her lips moving, could see the desperate efficiency in the way her hands worked. "Come on, stay with me. Stay with me."
But Helen wasn't moving anymore.
The monitors were screaming.
And then—flat.
One long, continuous tone that Carol would hear in her nightmares for the rest of her life.
"Starting compressions," someone said.
Carol watched Dr. Laxmi's hands press down on Helen's chest—one, two, three, four—the rhythm mechanical and desperate.
"Push epi."
"Pushed."
"Still no pulse."
"Again."
More compressions. More medications. More frantic movement that looked less like choreography now and more like chaos.
Carol's legs gave out. She slid down the wall, her back against the glass, still watching because she couldn't look away, couldn't do anything but watch as they tried to save Helen and failed.
She didn't know how long it went on. Minutes. Hours. Time had stopped meaning anything.
Finally—finally—Dr. Laxmi stepped back from the table. Her shoulders sagged. She said something to Dr. Diabaté that Carol couldn't hear, and he nodded, his own face drawn with exhaustion and grief.
Dr. Laxmi looked up toward the gallery, and even from here, even through the glass, Carol could see the devastation in her eyes.
I'm sorry, she mouthed.
Someone came to get Carol eventually. A nurse—not one Carol recognized—with a kind face and a hand on her elbow, guiding her up from the floor.
"Mrs. Sturka? Come with me."
Carol followed numbly. Down a hallway. Into a small consultation room with chairs and a box of tissues on the table and abstract art on the walls that was probably meant to be soothing but just looked like someone had vomited pastels.
Dr. Laxmi appeared a few minutes later, still in her scrubs, blood on her shoes. She sat down across from Carol and took a breath that seemed to cost her everything.
"Carol. I'm so sorry. We did everything we could."
Carol stared at her. The words made sense individually but not together. Not about Helen.
"She had a placental abruption," Dr. Laxmi continued, her voice clinical because clinical was probably the only way she could get through this. "The placenta separated from the uterine wall prematurely. It caused massive internal bleeding. We tried to control the hemorrhage, but—" Her voice cracked. "We couldn't save her. I'm so sorry."
"No," Carol said.
"Carol—"
"No. You're wrong. She was fine. Dr. Laxmi, she was fine. You said everything looked good. You said—"
"I know. I know what I said. And it did look good. But sometimes—" Dr. Laxmi's hands were shaking. "Sometimes things go wrong that we can't predict. That we can't prevent."
"But you tried. I saw you trying. You could have—there must have been something—"
"We did everything." Dr. Laxmi's voice was firm now. "Dr. Diabaté and I—we threw everything we had at this. We gave her blood, we gave her clotting factors, we tried manual compression, we—" She stopped. Breathed. "She lost too much blood too quickly. Her body couldn't recover."
Carol's vision swam. "I want to see her."
"Of course. But Carol—your daughter."
Your daughter.
Carol had forgotten. In the horror of watching Helen die, she'd forgotten about the tiny screaming thing the nurse had carried away.
"She's in the NICU," Dr. Laxmi said gently. "She's stable but struggling. Thirty-four weeks is early. Her lungs aren't fully developed. She's on a ventilator and being monitored closely.
"Is she going to die too?"
The question came out flat, emotionless, and Dr. Laxmi flinched.
"No. No, Carol. She's fighting. She's strong. But she needs specialized care, and—" Dr. Laxmi hesitated. "You should go home. Get some rest. Bring some clothes for her, some basics. Dr. Wojcik our neonatal specialist, will be doing rounds early tomorrow morning, and you can meet with her then, talk about the care plan."
"I want to stay with her."
"I know. But the NICU has strict protocols, especially for babies this fragile. They need to stabilize her, run tests, make sure she can regulate her temperature and breathing. You being there right now—" Dr. Laxmi's voice was gentle but firm. "It won't help her. And you need to take care of yourself."
"I don't give a fuck about taking care of myself."
"Carol—"
"My wife just died. My daughter is on a ventilator. And you want me to go home? To what? An empty house? A nursery we didn't finish painting?"
Dr. Laxmi's voice trying to sound firm. "I know. I know this is impossible. But Carol, you've been awake all night. You're in shock. You need to process this, and you can't do that here. Go home. Sleep if you can. Eat something. Shower. And come back in the morning. Your daughter will still be here. I promise."
Carol wanted to argue. Wanted to scream. Wanted to do anything but sit in this horrible pastel room and accept that Helen was dead and their daughter was alone in a plastic box fighting to breathe.
But she was so tired. Bone-deep, soul-crushing tired.
"Can I see Helen?" she asked again, quieter this time.
"Of course."
They took her to a different room—one that was clearly meant for this, for grieving families and impossible goodbyes. Helen was on a gurney, covered with a white sheet up to her shoulders, her face peaceful in a way that felt like a lie.
She didn't look dead. She looked like she was sleeping.
Carol sat in the chair beside her and took her hand—still soft but cold—and tried to find words that didn't exist.
"I'm sorry," she whispered finally. "I'm so sorry. I should have—I don't know. Done something. Been better. Been ready. I'm sorry I wasn't ready."
Helen didn't answer.
Carol sat there for a long time, holding her hand, until a nurse came and said gently that they needed to move her.
"Where?" Carol asked.
"To the morgue. For now. There will be paperwork later. Arrangements to make. But not tonight."
Carol stood on shaking legs and looked down at Helen one last time.
"I'll take care of her," she said. "Our daughter. I'll—" Her voice broke. "I'll figure it out. I promise."
She kissed Helen's forehead—and walked out of the room before she could fall apart completely.
Dr. Laxmi was waiting in the hallway. "Carol. Before you go—do you have someone you can call? Someone who can be with you?"
Carol thought about her phone, sitting somewhere in her bag with a dead battery. Thought about the people in her life—Val, a few writer friends she barely saw, Helen's parents in Michigan who she hadn't spoken to in months.
"No," she said.
"Are you sure? I really don't think you should be alone tonight."
"I'm sure."
Dr. Laxmi looked like she wanted to argue but didn't have the energy. "Okay. But Carol—if you need anything. Anything at all. You call me. Day or night. I mean it."
Carol nodded, not trusting herself to speak.
"And one more thing." Dr. Laxmi pulled a card from her pocket. "This is Dr. Wojcik's contact information. She'll be in the NICU by seven tomorrow morning. She's excellent, Carol. Your daughter is in good hands."
Carol took the card without looking at it.
"Go home," Dr. Laxmi said again, softer this time. "Try to rest. And come back tomorrow. Your daughter needs you."
Your daughter.
Carol walked out of the hospital into the pre-dawn darkness. The parking lot was nearly empty, the sky that strange purple-gray that came just before sunrise. She found her car—Helen's purse still in the passenger seat, the hospital bag still in the trunk—and sat behind the wheel without starting the engine.
Four AM.
Six hours ago, Helen had been alive. Six hours ago, they'd been eating pasta and watching Golden Girls and arguing about names.
Six hours.
Carol's hands found the steering wheel. She started the car, pulled out of the parking lot, and drove home on autopilot.
The house was exactly as they'd left it—front door unlocked, lights still on in the bedroom, Helen's tea mug on the nightstand.
Carol stood in the doorway of their bedroom and stared at the unmade bed, at the impression in the sheets where Helen had been lying just hours ago.
And then she went downstairs to the kitchen, opened the cabinet where they kept the alcohol for guests, and found the bottle of vodka they'd bought for Helen's birthday party two years ago and never finished.
She poured it into a glass—didn't bother with ice or mixers, just straight vodka—and drank it in three long swallows that burned going down.
Then she poured another.
By the third glass, she was crying.
By the fourth, she was on the floor.
By the fifth, she passed out with the bottle still in her hand, and didn't dream at all.