Comment on It Is Not The Voice That Commands The Story (It Is The Ear)

  1. fanfictiongreenirises Thu 08 Oct 2020 08:42PM UTC

    !!!!!!!!!!!!!

    Good morning it is 7am and you have ended me w this wonderful piece of angsty h/c (Like srsly how am I meant to Function now after this??? I'm gonna be thinking about this fic for Days)

    So many things I loved about this (but I feel like u already know that lmao) like,,, not even getting into the h/c but Bruce manning the comms and spending more time than ever talking to his kids??? Yesss and the bit where Clark's like u don't have to cash in a favour and bRUCE IS LIKE OKAY I RESCIND IT ASDFGHJKL

    AND THEN. THEN. THE ACTUAL TRANSMISSION AND BRUCE'S GROWING WORRY AND HIS MIND DOING THRU ALL THE WORST SCENARIO CONCLUSIONS (and i mean,,, he wasn't wrong tho lol) (Also brings me to another point w Clark lile,,, I just find it rly funny that he would have at some point had to really study the human body in order to not be like "yeah it's,,, the top left of the brain kinda near the front? Idk it's above the ear but also forward a little bit" like a teen Clark who just got out of human bio classes throwing his Newfound Knowledge around is so endearing and funny to me)

    AND THEN U HAD BRUCE BEING THERE WHEN DICK WOKE UP AND AHHHHH ITS LITERALLY ALL MY FAVOURITE THINGS PACKED INTO ONE (but this is you so I'm not even surprised =D)

    Thank you sm for writing this <3<3<3

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    1. AuroraKant Fri 09 Oct 2020 07:51AM UTC

      I honestly didn't expect a comment on this story anymore :D

      Feel very, very smeked right now because you, Irises, are making me very, very happy right now!!!! AND ALSO YOU DID THIS TO YOURSELF!!!

      Yes! The kids are like: "YOU ARE OUR COMM MAN NOW! YOU HAVE TO USE YOUR WORDS TO COMMUNICATE AND WE KIND OF LIKE THAT ACTUALLY!!" and I am absolutely here to support them. AND THANK YOU!!! You are the first person who commented on Bruce being like "Okay,,, the favor is mine now again" -cackling-

      !!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THERE IT IS AGAIN! THE DOUBLE POV! FOR DOUBLE THE FUN! (and double the pain!) He wasn't wrong.... but I have the feeling that doesn't really satisfy him. Sometimes I think Bruce is the kind of person who sometimes just really wishes he was wrong... you know? (wertzhjklö - Young Adult Clark asking his biology student friend for super detailed brain anatomy books because Luis laughed when Superman called the injury of a person "Um... left-right kind of above the eye"... and now he *knows*)

      YES!!! MUCH SOFT BATDAD!!! I don't often write him like that... but sometimes I do, and I am glad that you like it!!!
      Thank you so much for your cute and amazing comment! <3<3<3<3

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