HIIIIIII HI EVERYONE HI IM LEO I BETA READ THIS ITS SO GOOD LILY IS AN AMAZING WRITER TRUST
i already said all this in dms when you sent this to me but im gonna talk about how much i like this fic again because its really really really good OKAY first of all i loooove love love love how descriptive you are with emotions. like. i can imagine everything the characters are feeling just from your words and it is INCREDIBLE i'm not very familiar with vocaloid yuri besides what you've rambled about to me + what ive seen on your twitter but i already feel like i understand these characters so well from how you wrote them alone its amazing im so crazy about them already AND THE WAY YOU WROTE LILYS INNER DIALOUGE ughh im crazy. yuri. AND YOU CHOSE A FANTASTIC DYNAMIC TO WRITE big fan of grumpy x sunshine or however the trope goes (gee who could have guessed) ((mitsukou lover)) and the end had me kicking my feet n giggling n shit im dead im dying save me vocaloid yuri vocaloid yuri save me save my life im dying im dead im no longer alive goodbye everyone
so yeah the fic was okay or whatever its not like i liked it or anything looks the other way crossing my arms and huffing
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