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  1. Public Bookmark 32

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    Pete McVries Won the Long Walk two years ago. Deep in the throes of his own personal angst, he watches Ray Garraty Win and use his state-granted Wish to shoot the Major in the head. Garraty becomes a symbol of survival and resistance to the country, but to Pete, he starts to become something else.

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  2. Public Bookmark 43

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    Pete’s talking pretty now, telling Ray something about dancing and the moon. From the way he’s looking at him, they might as well be the only two people on the road. Forget the other boys, forget the cameras, forget the unblinking soldiers cradling their carbines, Garraty and McVries might as well be the last two slow dancers at the prom.

    Or: Five walkers who think Pete will die for Ray, one who thinks Ray will die for Pete.

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  3. Public Bookmark 48

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    When Pete McVries gets one cosmic do-over, a choice to redo the Walk and save Ray, he doesn’t hesitate. The muscle pain, torn-up feet, sleep deprivation, hallucinations, nausea, and finally a bullet — he’ll go through it all again to get five more days with Ray, and to make sure it’s Ray who makes it out alive.

    When it turns out that this is not just a one-time do-over but a time loop, he doesn’t quite know what comes next.

    Or: Can a highway in Maine, like Hill House or the Overlook Hotel, be born bad?

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    09 Dec 2025

  4. Public Bookmark 62

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    Who are you? She wants to ask. Why did you save my son?
    She’s both grateful and terrified. When she dropped Ray off at the starting line, she never really thought he’d come back to her. And if he did, it would be as someone she didn’t recognize. A scraped out shell of her son. She didn’t think he’d come home like this, still able to laugh and talk animatedly with his hands and follow her around the kitchen as she made dinner. It’s a debt she can never repay, and she doesn’t know how to react to this boy in her home.

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  5. Public Bookmark 40

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    "Say Ray, you know this is the forty-seventh time we've done this walk. Kind of funny, given it's your number and all. Maybe this will be our lucky one.”

    “Yeah. Maybe we'll die for real this time,” Garraty said flatly.

    “Aw, don't say that, boo.” McVries gave him that hard, slanted grin. Ray wanted to punch him. “Let's think about something happier. Maybe you're my Sleeping Beauty, and we'll ride off into the sunset together. Maybe I'll lasso the moon down for you so we can dance forever. How about that?”

    There was still so far to walk—and walk—and walk—and—

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    19 Nov 2025