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Quentin wasn’t sure when he’d become the kind of person who avoided life by pretending he was too busy with homework to go out on a Friday night, while he drank wine by himself in his dorm room instead. Maybe he’d always been that person. No, actually, he had always been that person. No point in trying to delude even himself.
Grad school hadn’t changed him, not really. Same overactive brain. Same socially anxious spiral. Same need to hide behind books, although these days, textbooks more than fantasy novels, but Fillory still stayed with him. He’d brought all of the books with him to the dorm. Hardcover special editions with worn-down edges. The only thing he read more often than he worried. Fillory still lived inside of him. His childish spark that kept him going, gave him purpose.
He stared at them now, stacked neatly on the desk in his tiny, too-quiet room. Outside the window, the city glowed. Loud, alive, full of all of the things he was not.
He should be writing. Or at least pretending to write. But his phone buzzed again and again on the desk, lit up with messages from Margo.
Margo: Come on out, Q.
Margo: Don’t be a hermit. It’s bad for your skin.
Margo: You’re wasting the prime of your twinkhood.
Margo: 🧍🏻♂️🧎🏻♂️🍆????
He didn’t answer. He didn’t want to be lectured in person about his “deeply depressing celibacy,” or hear Eliot casually joke about how Quentin needed to be “properly manhandled.” Or worse, hear the two of them talk about last weekend’s bar crawl-slash-threesome and laugh while Quentin sat there blushing into his Coke like an overgrown Victorian child.
They were just…different. Shiny. Confident. Magnetic in a way Quentin had never been. Margo was a walking human embodiment of confidence in heels, and Eliot… Eliot Waugh was the kind of guy people turned to look at on the street. All dark eyes and sharp clothes and whiskey-smooth charm. Quentin just wasn’t like that okay?
But despite all of that he liked Quentin. Dragged him out constantly, forced him into friendship. Chose him for some unknown reason- of all people. Teased him mercilessly, called him “darling” and “baby boy” and “my fragile little goose,” but liked him. They both did. Even when Quentin didn’t know what to say. Even when he flinched from touch and said the wrong thing and rambled on for too long about things only he cared about before he noticed and shut up.
They were trying to be his friends. For some reason that continues to baffle Quentin.
Quentin knew that. It just didn’t stop the feeling that he was always a few steps behind—socially, sexually, humanly. Especially around Eliot.
Especially when he and Eliot had gotten a little too drunk together once and, after Quentin had gone on again about fillory before blushing and realizing Eliot was just looking at him fondly, his voice went low and amused and he said things like, “Quentin, you ever think you might be the kind of boy who wants to kneel for someone?”
God.
That line had haunted Quentin for days. Still did actually.
Or when he called himself “Daddy” in a mockingly seductive tone while pouring wine and made it sound like a joke, except Quentin wasn’t so sure it was one. Not anymore. Not with how… often.
Margo would tease right back though, it was a little game between them, between knowing glances
He’d laughed it off, turned pink, said something awkward, probably. But the truth was….okay like yeah. Yeah, he’d thought about it. He’d fantasized about it. Being told what to do. Letting go. Letting someone else decide, just for a second, what he was supposed to be. Not having to work or think so very hard about having to be a human being.
Someone who wanted him enough to take control. The idea was more than tempting.
And maybe he’d done a few too many late-night Reddit scrolls. Maybe he’d read more than one “How Do I Know If I’m a Submissive?” article. Maybe he’d gone searching and found a list of kink-friendly spaces in the city. Maybe one of them was only two train stops away.
He stared at the wine bottle on the floor. Half-empty now and a buzz just strong enough to blur the anxiety but not silence it.
“Fuck it,” he muttered. And stood.
The club didn’t look like much from the outside. Not sure what he was expecting, actually.
A nondescript black door on a quiet street, a tiny brass plaque that just read: Breakbills. The kind of place you’d probably just wind up walking past unless you knew what you were looking for. Quentin hesitated at the threshold, fingers damp where they gripped the strap of his messenger bag like it could shield him. Who brings a messenger bag to a club anyway? Quentin Coldwater, apparently. This was a mistake.
He almost turned around.
He should turn around.
He didn’t.
The guy at the door was polite, smiled at Quentin’s nervous stammering, checked his ID, and explained the rules. “Consent-based space. First floor is social. Second is play. No touching without permission. Red, yellow, green system. You good?”
Quentin nodded like his brain wasn’t melting, and he was for sure absorbing anything being said to him. Like doing this at all wasn’t completely out of character for him. Like this was normal.
He wasn’t sure what he expected. Whips and chains and a dungeon, maybe. But the first floor looked like a cozy lounge bar dim lighting, low music, lots of leather and velvet. A few people in collars. A guy in a sheer shirt with rope marks on his wrists. Two women curled up in a booth, one feeding the other bits of chocolate and whispering in her ear.
It wasn’t scary. It was…definitely more intimate. Like walking into the middle of a secret story when he wasn’t supposed to be there.
He took one step inside, then another.
Legs shaking, fighting the urge to turn right back around and head back to his room where it was safe. He made it closer to the middle of the room, where he could look around better.
And then he saw him.
Leaning against the bar, sipping from a wine glass, wearing a silk shirt unbuttoned to his chest and dark tailored pants that clung like a sin—was Eliot.
Eliot Waugh.
Eliot Waugh, relaxed and radiant, chatting with the bartender, one hand lazily stroking the stem of his glass. There was a subtle air of ease about him almost like he belonged here. The way others watched him confirmed it. A woman gave him a respectful nod. A man in a collar trailed his eyes over Eliot’s profile like he knew exactly what Eliot could do with his hands.
It clicked all of a sudden.
He wasn’t exactly playing when he called himself “Daddy.” Wasn’t just trying to tease with Quentin or make him blush. This was his scene. This wasn’t just a joke. Eliot wasn’t just comfortable here, and beyond that, he was known.
Quentin’s breath caught. His knees almost went out. He froze. He needed to leave right now before–
Eliot turned slightly …and saw him. Made eye contact. Quentin was standing in the middle of the floor, holding a stupid messenger bag, frozen like a scared animal.
For a second, he didn’t react, he just looked and blinked, tilted his head.
Then he smiled. All slow and sharp and fucking utterly delighted.
Quentin never felt more like caught prey in his life. (And why did that feel kind of good even with the panic signals of “bad bad bad” happening?)
“Well, well,” he said, voice low and purring as he approached. “Look what the kink gods dragged in.”
Quentin was frozen. His mouth felt like sandpaper. “I didn’t— I didn’t know you—”
“That I was into this? Or that I would be here?” Eliot’s grin turned wicked.
Quentin went red to the roots.
“What are you doing here?” he blurted.
Eliot’s eyes sparkled. “Looking for a boy to boss around. Maybe spank a little. Maybe a lot. You know–have fun.”
Quentin made a small squeaking noise that he would later deny if asked.
Eliot’s voice dropped, low and soft and teasing. “Did you come here for fun, or were you hoping someone would tell you what to do, hm?”
Quentin’s breath hitched. He couldn’t move. Couldn’t think.
Eliot stepped a little closer, gaze softening just a little. Eyes filling with understanding. “Relax. You’re safe here. Nothing happens without a yes.”
“I don’t— I mean, I think I’m—” Quentin swallowed. “I just wanted to see.”
Eliot nodded. “Then you’re already doing better than most and I’m proud of you for that, really.”
He reached out slowly, fingertips brushing Quentin’s wrist. “Come sit with me. Let me buy you a drink. And you can tell me what it is you think you want.”
Quentin’s pulse thundered but he nodded.
And followed Eliot.
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The bar area was quieter now. The early evening crowd had trickled into upstairs rooms or slipped into the shadowy comfort of the booths as the noise picked up inside. Quentin sat beside Eliot on a plush, dark velvet couch near the back wall, his knees drawn together too tightly, fingers clenched tight around a glass of water he hadn’t touched. He could feel the low thrum of the music through the soles of his shoes, like the room itself had a pulse.
Eliot, by contrast, looked maddeningly at ease. One arm draped casually across the back of the couch, one leg crossed over the other like he was posing for a photo shoot. He watched Quentin with an amused, almost indulgent expression, like this was all exactly how he’d hoped it would go. Qunentin didn’t dare let himself hope that exact sentiment was true.
“You can breathe, you know,” Eliot said, voice rich with amusement. “We’re not going to start just spanking you in public. Not unless you beg, of course.”
Quentin nearly dropped the glass. His throat bobbed, and he made a noise that could only be described as a whimper.
“I’m not— I didn’t—” he stammered.
“You didn’t come here to get spanked?” Eliot teased, lips twitching. “Because that’s not what your face said when I mentioned it earlier.”
He was getting too much enjoyment out of this while Quentins brain was absolutely melting. What an asshole.
“I came to look,” Quentin muttered, focusing intently on the rim of his glass. “I didn’t even think I’d actually… see someone I know. Let alone you.”
“Why not me?” Eliot asked, genuinely curious.
Quentin glanced at him, then away again so fast it was like just the act of looking physically hurt. ”I don’t- I didn’t expect…I don’t know” he swallowed roughly, “Because you’re, like. Confident. Cool. You have sex. With people. More than once…which I guess is a list of reasons you would be here instead of not….here” he finished lamely. Hiding his face by taking a sip from his glass.
Eliot laughed, delighted. “A glowing character reference. Keep going, you’re really selling it.”
“I didn’t mean it like that.”
“I know,” Eliot said, softer now. “But here’s the thing, Q. I’ve wanted to drag you here for months.”
Quentin blinked, heart skipping. “What?”
“You heard me.” Eliot’s gaze didn’t waver. “I thought you would fit right in here. You’re the kind of boy who blushes when someone gives you a single modicum of praise. Who melts when I raise my voice. Who practically folds in on himself when I so much as look disappointed.”
Quentin’s fingers flexed, knuckles whitening.
“You want structure. That’s very obvious and it’s okay! But you…you’re so good, Quentin,” Eliot said, voice low and reverent now. “You’d be an amazing submissive. I can just…see it in you. Anyone could if they knew what they were looking for. It’s so obvious. You crave direction. You want to be told you’re enough. That you don’t have to make decisions or prove yourself. You want to feel small and held and absolutely adored. You want to be owned. Why else would you be brave enough to come here?”
Quentin felt heat rise so fast it made him dizzy. He couldn’t meet Eliot’s eyes.
Eliot stared at him for a minute, watching Quentin look anywhere but at him. “Look at me.”
Quentin’s eyes snapped up fast even though it looked liked it pained him to do it. Like it hurt to make the eye contact.
“And you are,” Eliot said, voice low and reverent now. “You’re such a good boy, Quentin. Even when you’re anxious. Even when you’re awkward. Especially when you’re trying so hard not to need anyone or anything.”
That broke something open. Something absolutely cracking apart inside of his chest.
Quentin looked down, jaw trembling, tears prickling hot behind his eyes. It wasn’t the humiliation of being read so thoroughly—Okay, well maybe a little bit. But also…it was the relief. The absolute, earth shattering relief of being known and not flinched away from.
Eliot leaned in, lips brushing Quentin’s ear making him shiver even though he was hot all over. “I could give you so much,” he murmured. “I could make you feel weightless. I could touch you in ways that make you forget your own name. I could make you come undone and put you back together softer.”
Quentin couldn’t speak. He wasn’t sure he could even breathe. This wasn’t real life.
“But I won’t,” Eliot said gently, straightening, voice returning to its normal volume. “Not unless you ask me to.”
Quentin blinked, throat dry.
“I don’t play with boys who don’t want it. And I don’t play with boys who don’t know how to say yes,” Eliot said. “You deserve to choose. You have to choose.”
Before Quentin could wrap his mouth around a single syllable, a familiar voice cut through the haze.
“Well, well, well,” Margo drawled, sliding into the empty seat beside Quentin like it was being saved just for her. “Is this our Quentin? In a club? With Eliot? After ignoring my texts earlier? ”
Quentin startled so hard he nearly dropped his glass.
“I knew it,” Margo grinned. “You always had that repressed little edge. Sweet, nervous, always squirming when El called you ‘baby’ in public. I should’ve bet money.”
“Margo,” Quentin said, voice cracking.
“Oh hush, Baby Q. I’m thrilled for you.” She turned to Eliot. “And you, Daddy dearest?”
Eliot smiled slowly. “I gave him the speech.”
“You did the whole ‘you’re such a good boy’ thing, didn’t you?”
“I mean… look at him,” Eliot said, as if that answered everything.
Margo laughed. “Jesus. You’re already halfway to housebreaking him.”
Quentin flushed scarlet; there was nothing else to do.
Eliot turned back to him, his gaze warm but firm. “Sleep on it,” he said seriously. “No pressure. No rush. I’m not going to do anything unless you ask. But if you wake up tomorrow and still want this— and more importantly, want this, want me, then you tell me.”
He paused, then leaned in, close enough Quentin could feel the heat of his breath against his skin again. “And if you do?” he whispered. “I’ll make you feel so good, you’ll forget you were ever afraid.”
Quentin’s heart cracked open in his chest.
Eliot stood, brushing invisible lint from his sleeve. “Come on, Margo. Let’s give our boy some space.”
Margo winked. “Don’t be a stranger, Q. We already like you. Text me when you get home.”
And then they were gone, leaving Quentin alone in the booth, chest tight, head spinning.
He didn’t know what he wanted. Not exactly.
But he knew he didn’t need to sleep on it. This was like… a top 3 life moment. This was….everything. Despite his fears, despite his heart pounding in his chest and the sweat sticking to his skin, how hard he was just from being talked to, despite the fact that he didn’t even know if he was stuck in a dream, He knew he wanted. Wanted nothing more. Wanted Eliot.